SGA:Fic: Be Good, McShep, NC-17

[beadattitude]

I wroted this for yin_again, who has been a big ole klutz today and needs to sit still and stop typing. This is my way of helping. It started out as a comment fic, and, er.....well. I couldn't very well stop before the good part

Comments

[facetofcathy]

Okay, so in SGA you get over a broken bone in a week right, so can we see the fic where John can be tied up? Please? Begging here.

That was a very nice little bit of happy smut. Thanks for that.

[beadattitude]

Heh. Honey, I'll put it in the idea que. I'm easing my way into this genre.

[lillian13]

Mmmmmmm. yummy!

[beadattitude]

::grins goofily::

[busaikko]

Yikes! Um, hot! Scary hot! OMG, John begging and dusting in the same fic. You rang my kink buttons but good....

[beadattitude]

::wiggles happily:: Yay!!

Scary hot? I nevah had that reaction before!

Reading and commenting simultaneously:

[windbringer1]

"You're in no condition for me to tie you," Rodney warned, "do you want me to stop?"

Nnnnnnnnnnnnngh. Yes, yes please. I need to find me someone who can talk like *that* and fuck me.

"Good boy," he whispered, right in John's ear, wondering...

John's entire body coiled tight in an instant and he nearly hyperventilted, keening with the effort of staying still. His fingers clutched the sheet a little tighter, but Rodney could allow that.

::melt:: God, Bead. Seriously. Everyone I've ever dated assumes I want to be the top, and I do like it, but this thing you've written right here? This is what I really want, nearly all the time.

"I begged for you, Rodney," John's voice was all dark promise, "give it to me."
If this is you on a creative hyper-kick, I will gladly supply you with coffee and free beta and I will wave pompoms from the sidelines. You melted my BRAIN.

Re: Reading and commenting simultaneously:

[beadattitude]

You are too good to me. ::hugs::

I tell you; I've had the same reaction. Through careful, uncharacteristically (for me) patient behavior modifications, my husband is finally getting the message and is becoming quite adept at words and gestures, as it were. And he finally finally gets that he doesn't have to approach me like I'm on a pedestal but can just tell me what he wants and where he wants me and have it.

So. It can be done.

I'm so very glad it worked for you! I love reading D/s fic, but I didn't think I had it "down" enough to write it myself. ::grins::

[burnishdvictory]

John would so be the type to attempt to work through pain. Good thing he has Rodney there to stop him. :)

Very very hot.

[beadattitude]

And he totally doesn't think it's that big a deal until he wakes up in so much pain because he's over done it. Big dummy.