you slept on the train and did not smile

[be_themoon]

things I am doing: being rubbish at keeping up with my f-list. being rubbish at ScriptFrenzy, though I am finally starting to catch up. being absolutely rubbish at not procrastinating. woo, 10-page paper due in about three weeks! uh. heh.

Today in poetry, we have something short and not really sweet. sort of? but lovely.

The Spirit Says, You Are

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[zempasuchil]

GOING WEST
ON A TRAIN

Under you the plains widened, turned silver. and the open mouth, and snow falling through the ribs
Of the dead.
You were all I had
:OOOO

oh wow I am absolutely shocked by how much I love this. wow. betsy you are the BEST for poetry <33333

[be_themoon]

I BELIEVE IN POETRY. <3333

ALL HE HAAAAD.

[metonomia]

it IS sweet! Short and sweet and powerful.

[be_themoon]

I love it so so much.