I've already said this but it's such a different experience reading one of your completed fics and waiting on one to be written. Definitely re-reading this when it's done so I can get the full effect of the smut over many chapters.
So I can accept no orgy but. Can we still get Jin to finesse something w/ Jungkook's mom while dubious things are happening. Or, more generally, can I just have more scenes of Jin finessing things. I think that's mostly all I wanted.
Yoongi making the littleness of Kookie's dick a positive thing rather than a negative thing is again, so fucking sweet. You said he likes sweet things, not that he's a fucking sugar plantation wtf. Seriously the amount of fluff that is here...
Also the whole, not orgasming together but also still making sure the other person gets their pleasure is great.
They really are a sugakookie! They're giving me diabetes. And if that's the way to die, then I accept my death fully.
That blowjob was fucking fantastic, with all the balls and cute tiny dick. I never realized that can actually be fantastic.
I loved how Kookie pulled Yoongi in, because it was really about them, both of them, and I love how they touched each other's soul marks. It was making love.
that was intense. and i am happy for both of them and proud of both of them. yoongi was careful with jungkook and jungkook let things happen on their own, going by what he wanted and felt and i'm sure that felt really good.
ok. i had this niggling feeling about seokjin and taehyung in the previous chapters that i should not have ignored but at least i was right in that particular hunch. and you were right. it was so obvious. but i focused on sugakookie so~^^
i am gonna hate the fact that jungkook has to go back home after that. i want him to just spend time with yoongi. hahahahaha
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So I can accept no orgy but. Can we still get Jin to finesse something w/ Jungkook's mom while dubious things are happening. Or, more generally, can I just have more scenes of Jin finessing things. I think that's mostly all I wanted.
Yoongi making the littleness of Kookie's dick a positive thing rather than a negative thing is again, so fucking sweet. You said he likes sweet things, not that he's a fucking sugar plantation wtf. Seriously the amount of fluff that is here...
Also the whole, not orgasming together but also still making sure the other person gets their pleasure is great.
Also, awwwww Seokjin and Namjoon awwwwww
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there's a little more finessing, but not too much. this fic is almost done and i wanted more sugakookie smut, so yeah ...
lol he is indeed a Suga Plantation :)
glad you like it!
NamJin can't stay away from each other, just like Yunjae!
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That blowjob was fucking fantastic, with all the balls and cute tiny dick. I never realized that can actually be fantastic.
I loved how Kookie pulled Yoongi in, because it was really about them, both of them, and I love how they touched each other's soul marks. It was making love.
I appreciate you for writing this.
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and yes, the tiny dick thing is so fantastic. when you have a tiny dick, every job is a deep throat, now isn't it :)
i'm glad you like it <3
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that was intense. and i am happy for both of them and proud of both of them. yoongi was careful with jungkook and jungkook let things happen on their own, going by what he wanted and felt and i'm sure that felt really good.
ok. i had this niggling feeling about seokjin and taehyung in the previous chapters that i should not have ignored but at least i was right in that particular hunch. and you were right. it was so obvious. but i focused on sugakookie so~^^
i am gonna hate the fact that jungkook has to go back home after that. i want him to just spend time with yoongi. hahahahaha
update again soon!!!
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You should never ignore the niggles when it comes to me and my writing :)
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Glad you like it! <3
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