I really loved this. Especially the Ron/Draco aspect. You're the only author I've read to pull that off successfully.
The descriptions of deep magic in this chapter are compelling. A totally different level of power. Liked the Hogwarts castle magic recognizing their elemental bond, intermingling with them (owl treats, perfect green tea).
Your Hermione is a woman, not a girl. While I'm not into het as a rule, Draco's relationship with her rings strong and true.
And I truly enjoyed Narcissa calling Draco "My dragon"!
Ron and Draco make me happy. I really did write this to be more of a Harry/Draco pairing, but Ron was like ... "nope, I love him too" in my head so yeah
I always felt like the magic in harry potter was too shallow, not explored enough, so I wanted to add some to this. I'm glad I was successful!
i loved this ending. it was just perfectly sweet with the right touches of of sexy and amusement and "entertainment"
i'm glad that they all survived. that each of them have more control now than before. that with draco finally with them, bonded to each of them, making them complete. they're stronger now and them feeling the magic within hogwarts is proof of that.
draco's mom's gradual change fore the better greatly influenced draco's change as well. he truly, fiercely loves his mother and that gave him the courage to realize and accept that he does love harry and eventually came to love ron and hermione as well. i love how narcissa's words had such an impact on draco. that part actually made me a little teary. she is just so supportive of his son, and he is so lucky to have her as his mom. i love how narcissa calls draco "my dragon".
harry understands draco more than anyone else. draco knows this and he is the same.
it's sad to see this end but all great things must. hahahaha
thanks for sharing this wonderful, magical story. like i
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I love it! I'm so happy that they ended up together and Happy. It took time for Draco to trust them but he finally opened himself up :P And i know that this was suppoused to be about harry and Draco mostly... but Ron. I think i'm going to see if i find more fics of them somewhere. they are not going to be you but... it'll have to do. XD Thanks for the fic!! <3
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The descriptions of deep magic in this chapter are compelling. A totally different level of power. Liked the Hogwarts castle magic recognizing their elemental bond, intermingling with them (owl treats, perfect green tea).
Your Hermione is a woman, not a girl. While I'm not into het as a rule, Draco's relationship with her rings strong and true.
And I truly enjoyed Narcissa calling Draco "My dragon"!
Kudos as always, Traci.
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I always felt like the magic in harry potter was too shallow, not explored enough, so I wanted to add some to this. I'm glad I was successful!
thank you for always reading what I write! <3
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i loved this ending. it was just perfectly sweet with the right touches of of sexy and amusement and "entertainment"
i'm glad that they all survived. that each of them have more control now than before. that with draco finally with them, bonded to each of them, making them complete. they're stronger now and them feeling the magic within hogwarts is proof of that.
draco's mom's gradual change fore the better greatly influenced draco's change as well. he truly, fiercely loves his mother and that gave him the courage to realize and accept that he does love harry and eventually came to love ron and hermione as well. i love how narcissa's words had such an impact on draco. that part actually made me a little teary. she is just so supportive of his son, and he is so lucky to have her as his mom. i love how narcissa calls draco "my dragon".
harry understands draco more than anyone else. draco knows this and he is the same.
it's sad to see this end but all great things must. hahahaha
thanks for sharing this wonderful, magical story. like i ( ... )
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thank you , my haru haru, for always reading everything I write. I appreciate it. :)
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I love it! I'm so happy that they ended up together and Happy. It took time for Draco to trust them but he finally opened himself up :P
And i know that this was suppoused to be about harry and Draco mostly... but Ron. I think i'm going to see if i find more fics of them somewhere. they are not going to be you but... it'll have to do. XD
Thanks for the fic!! <3
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I'm glad you love it! Making them happy was the whole point of this fic!
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glad you like it! <3
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