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hamhamheaven May 28 2016, 20:09:50 UTC
Reita saves the day!!! I may have actually squealed in excitement at that part! (Even if the motorcycle chase did make me a bit queasy.) Bi's death was...I'm still a bit in shock. I can understand why Jaejoong did it, but they could have gotten some useful information from him if they'd kept him alive a while. And now, Yunho will be governor just like Teuk wanted. I hope the reforms progress the way he's planned.

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be_ddelusionall June 1 2016, 15:30:27 UTC
Yeah ... after seeing the GazettE in LA, I knew I had to add them to this story. So they get to be awesome heroes. *giggles* And I love Reita. Fucking sexy sexy sexy.

Yay for squealing!

You know, when I was writing this, I didn't even think about keeping him alive. Jaejoong wanted to shoot him. So I gave him a reason. :)

glad you like it! <3

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hamhamheaven June 1 2016, 18:37:36 UTC
Rei is frickin' adorable! He and Kai don't get nearly the attention they deserve. (The rhythm section gives me life!)

I don't blame Joongie one bit for wanting Bi dead as quickly as possible. If I'd been in his position, I probably would have killed him too.

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be_ddelusionall June 1 2016, 18:54:14 UTC
Reita is my guilty pleasure. I tell my husband that Reita is the only man on this planet that he needs to worry about. I would let Reita do dirty sexual things to me and then beg him for more.

And Kai is such a cutie. :)

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jaan30 May 28 2016, 21:34:58 UTC
Such an exciting chase! And dangerous too omg lol I'm glad they made it in time ^^ and Bi, well served him right lol Jaejoong was right though, if he was left alive he would only cause more problems. This story is so long! Can't believe it's almost over though haha

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be_ddelusionall June 1 2016, 15:31:15 UTC
I've been wanting Bi dead since Chapter 4 of Tears of the Poor, so yeah ... *giggles*
and yes, so long ... ugh
but almost done!
glad you like it! <3

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kattan69 May 29 2016, 00:44:54 UTC
Wonderful..Bi is finally dead. They have revenged for almost everyone. Horray! Now everyone needs to be tended and Yunho to take over the government and changed some policies.

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be_ddelusionall June 1 2016, 15:31:39 UTC
Revenge has been served and now things just need to change!
thank you! glad you like it! <3

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jasexists May 29 2016, 11:06:34 UTC
The motorbike ride was very intense haha.
Wow...I can't believe this story is nearly done! It's been an amazing read.

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be_ddelusionall June 1 2016, 15:32:07 UTC
I can't believe it's almost done either.
Working on the last couple chapters. Needed to add some things
But yay!
glad you like it! <3

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harunotenshi May 29 2016, 12:07:07 UTC
somehow, i imagined everything happening in this chapter similarly to what you actually wrote.

i guessed that there would definitely trouble the second they landed... they did have warning before they even landed, so that's already a plus... the chase though, was nothing short of amazing because i pictured the entire scene differently and i loved yours better!

while i'm glad that bi is now dead, i'm mad at him for that desperate move he did, stabbing yunho just because he hadn't gotten what he wanted. i'm hoping that yunho will be safe, he is in safe hands plus he is surrounded by his alies as well...

kind of miffed at angel because like yunho, i didn't want what he wanted to actually happen... then again, i think angel had predicted everything well and made plans accordingly. now that yunho is governor, he will definitely make changes. changes for the better.

don't worry too much on the ending of this... i am hoping that your muse(s) will be cooperative and not give you a hard time :) so... until your next update!

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be_ddelusionall June 1 2016, 15:34:24 UTC
great minds, my haru haru - you always have understood my brain the best!!

when I started this fic oh so long ago, I always meant for Yunho to become Govenor. Always. Because what Angel and Heechul said in Pleasures of the Mighty is right - nothing is going to change until the policies change and only Yunho can change those policies.

I'm working on the final chapter right now ... and a short epilogue

<3

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