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be_ddelusionall

The Arrow's Flight 6/?

Jan 15, 2016 16:32

Title: The Arrow's Flight 6 ( Read more... )

pairing: changmin/junsu, super junior, junho (junsu's brother), yoohwan (yoochun's brother), warning: het, shinee, genre: historical, pairing: jaejoong/oc, pairing: yoochun/yoohwan, completed: arrows flight, pairing: yunho/heechul, pairing: junho/oc, rating: r

Comments 12

jasexists January 16 2016, 01:51:52 UTC

The thought of Changmin as a gangly teenager fumbling during his first time with Heechul is really making me smile.
Also, hurray for MinSu kisses!

be_ddelusionall January 18 2016, 20:17:40 UTC

*giggles* I know right!
I like to think it happened in real life.

glad you like it! <3

n3uromanc3r January 16 2016, 18:22:10 UTC

It's nice to see most of them already got over of their first shock and reassured Changmin about their support! Heechul reminiscing on their first encounter was really amusing!

Yoochun and Yoohwan are still a complete enigma for me... first it looked like Yoochun was the impulsive one with rush actions and Yoohwan is the one, who was thinking over things and placating Yoochun if needed, but after the comment in this chapter I don't know ... Yoohwan seems wild too! : D

But I'm disappointed in Changmin! Can't he let his poor prince recover properly before attacks him? Where is his self-control??? : D

Thank you for the lovely update, I miss Jaejoong, I hope he will have at least a short scene next time!

be_ddelusionall January 18 2016, 22:03:00 UTC

yeah, they've been a "family" of sorts for more than 10 years, so they'll all support him.

Yoochun and Yoohwan are supposed to be enigmas. It makes me happy. Yoohwan is indeed wild!

Could you control yourself? I couldn't. *giggles*

glad you like it! <3

songbird52317 January 17 2016, 03:12:05 UTC

I do so love this story. The pictures it makes in my head are so atmospheric. Can't wait for the next chapter when I'm hoping to hear Junsu's secrets.

be_ddelusionall January 18 2016, 22:03:19 UTC

thak you very much!
i'm glad you like it! <3

snowwball January 17 2016, 07:24:34 UTC

The Heechul character you created is so lewd lol but he gives that extra spice, if that makes sense.

so many things are still unclear... hopefully junsu's story will give light to a lot of why's.

be_ddelusionall January 18 2016, 22:04:23 UTC

lol Heechul is always lewd! *giggles*

hopefully things will become clear in my head too ;)

glad you like it!!!

harunotenshi January 17 2016, 10:24:58 UTC

ahhh things are starting to escalate now it seems...

changmin's inner circle include yoochun and yoohwan, probably yunho and heechul too... glad that junsu's on his way to complete recovery~^^

huh. changmin a gangly teenager with heechul for his first time... hahahahahaha~ that's cute and probably adorable~XDDDDD it's a good thing that changmin introduced yunho to heechul :D

kim junsu has some big secrets to tell :) i'm guessing that things will be revealed soon (in the next chapter! hopefully~)

be_ddelusionall January 18 2016, 22:06:16 UTC

Yes, those 5 will be the inner circle

*giggles* I love MinChul so much. I'm convinced that Changmin is mostly evil because of Heechul ;)

glad you like it! <3