Domestic Dreams (and Disasters) 3/4

[be_ddelusionall]

Title: Domestic Dreams (and Disasters) 3/4

Comments

[wassan20]

I GOT FIRST SMUT. I'VE BEEN READING FOR YEARS. COMMENTING FOR A YEAR AND THIS IS MY FIRST FIRST SMUT. OMG. OMG.

ahem..

I love this chapter. how Jaejoong gets all worried and flustered and panicky but Yunho just kisses it all away. .... protective Yunho is giving me daddy vibes. kinky daddy vibes. -purrs in submission-

What Seungho?? the leader cute Seungho?? please oh please. I think he's my favorite child.

[be_ddelusionall]

holy shit that picture is amazing! i love it!

<3 <3 <3

[owned_by_a_cat]

Omg, that final para is gold dust!
The rest is sweet too. I so feel for Jae having to face the whole horde. That can't be easy while they've no idea where their relationship is even going...
I'm lacking a writing gene or something, because I can't do stuff like that even tied up.... but I sure as hell enjoy reading it. Especially when it's done as well as this one.
Thank you!

[be_ddelusionall]

Yeah, YooMin just stealing the show :)

can't do what? huh?
/blushes/ thank you! <3

[jjbrownsugga]

I love your writing. I have read all of your stories and have never been disappointed. Thank you for taking the time, energy, and thought to entertain, excite, and distract us the way you do. I always look forward to your updates.

[be_ddelusionall]

/blushes/ thank you!
i like to distract y'all
glad you like it! <3

[creedee]

Wooww . Jae is a life saver and good w/ kids..
And nice blackmail material he have

[be_ddelusionall]

Jaejoong does have 8 older sisters in this fic ... lots of kids ... lots of practice :)
blackmail is always good <3
glad you like it! <3

[toshiani007]

It's been a long time since I haven't read a chapter of a fanfic three times in a row, but this one really worth it.
Loved loved loved it!!!
I think I'm going to read it again.
Thanks!!!
Hugs!!!

[be_ddelusionall]

aw, thank you! /blushes/
i'm really glad you like it so much! <3