A Knight of Fire 21/21

[be_ddelusionall]

Title: A Knight of Fire 21/21
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong, Yoochun/Junsu, Changmin/Junho, Heechul/Yoohwan
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: They aren't mine and I can't even claim the idea as mine because it is all devilaugh's fault

Comments

[harunotenshi]

and so things are moving along and the tyrant king has been removed.

i like changmin's and jaejoong's suggestions... it will be better for them not to be kings and also for them to be able to move around freely to help the people. it will be a challenge though to keep the appointed lords in check... but there is a lot of hope for their people. like changmin said, the people do not want a king~

yunho's a great leader. he can be king but he doesn't want to be and that shows how great a leader he already is. he doesn't have to be king but he can still continue helping others... with jaejoong~

LOL yoochun not wanting to be separated from junsu at all~XDDDDDDD

[be_ddelusionall]

*nods* and there will peace in the land :)

I only showed the reactions of one village to the King's Scribes (Yunho's) but it's a pretty standard reaction. :)

As long as YunJae and YooSu are together, I don't think any of them will complain

glad you liked it, my haru haru! <3
until the next update <3

[wassan20]

why can't real kings be as good and wise as Changmin??

I like how this ended, it's the start of a good world.

[be_ddelusionall]

because kings are greedy and stupid!

yes! thank you!
glad you like it! <3

[mearii87]

so you're writing an epilogue right

i mean...this was so good!!! you did a good job wrestling an unwilling yunho to the ground and working an ending anyway :) <3 yunho can just lead the five of them...plus the extras...

[be_ddelusionall]

*grins* it's more of a Part 22 than an epilobue *grins*

thank you! <3
i'm glad you liked it!
i'm sure Jaejoong will let Yunho 'be in charge' and he won't complain at all *giggles* <3

[jaan30]

Haha Yoohwan going with Yoosu to make sure they don't get "lost" lmao xD you could write another 50 chapters in this verse and I wouldn't get tired of it xD love it! Ahhh sad it's ending. Will have to read again later LOL thanks for sharing!<3

[be_ddelusionall]

i don't want to write another 50 chapters in this verse ... but I can never tell my Muse to shut up, so who knows!

glad you like it! <3

[devjacaiora]

lol for some reason I expect Yunho to still working in the Main hall... heheh

not sure if Yoohwan really goes with them to make sure they don't get lost of for another reason... like make sure they don't go in a dark alley... LOL

[be_ddelusionall]

i'm sure that Yoohwan being there won't stop YooSu from trying to find a dark alley :)

glad you like it! <3