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be_ddelusionall

Haven 2/5

Jan 07, 2013 16:59

Title: Haven 2/5
Pairing: Micky/Changmin, Micky/Ricky, Micky/Ricky/Changmin
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: They are only mine to play with in fanfictions.

Summary: A strange Korean boy walks into a cafe in the middle of BFE Arizona. He stirs up a rife of trouble and a gaggle of feelings that Micky should know better than to act on.

Warning: incest, ( Read more... )

completed: haven, warning: incest, warning: underage, yoohwan (yoochun's brother), threesome: yoochun/yoohwan/changmin, rating: nc-17, pairing: yoochun/yoohwan

Comments 51

cooljess2121 January 8 2013, 00:11:45 UTC

YES!

cooljess2121 January 8 2013, 00:34:15 UTC

The language barrier makes everything that much better! And can I just say that I love Rafael! If Changmin keeps learning English from him then he's gonna be in a lot if trouble soon.
And my heart also goes out to Ricky! He sure knows how to be a tease ;)

be_ddelusionall January 9 2013, 05:15:27 UTC

Rafael is definitely an important part of Changmin's "learning" experience :)

glad you like it! ♥

tarwen_xoxo January 8 2013, 00:18:03 UTC

Aww poor Micky, having to be trapped in that small home of his with two other boys...not!

Consider yourself lucky Micky!

be_ddelusionall January 9 2013, 05:15:40 UTC

yeah ... such a hardship :)

glad you like it! ♥

devilaugh January 8 2013, 00:20:51 UTC

So glad I didn't take a nap

devilaugh January 8 2013, 00:38:41 UTC

Oh my gosh, Changmin couldn't have acted more like Jailbait when he debuted, and he was only about 15 then! He's so incredibly adorable, I wouldn't be able to hold back. Micky is commendable, he has two jailbait boys enticing him and he hasn't pounced on either yet!

be_ddelusionall January 9 2013, 05:16:14 UTC

smut before sleep ... always :)

and yeah, when writing this, I keep thinking OMG I'M WRITING HUG!CHANGMIN!! ASLDFJ;ALSDJF

yeah ...

glad you like it! ♥

goldintheshadow January 8 2013, 00:27:22 UTC

a;djksfhlsdkfjh YES

I feel like an addict who's been deprived of their addiction and is now only getting it in small doses once a day. Is that bad?

This story is fantastic, I'm so glad you're still writing, I can't WAIT for the next chapter!!! ♥♥♥

be_ddelusionall January 9 2013, 05:16:49 UTC

i'm sorry - i'm a bad fic dealer ... :(
but i have to go to school

i think i'd go insane if I couldn't write

glad you like it! ♥

stirred_seoul January 8 2013, 00:35:06 UTC

SMUT

stirred_seoul January 8 2013, 05:28:22 UTC

Lucky Micky Is Lucky.
I'd Love To Be Smashed In Between Ricky And Changmin.
Yum. Can't Wait For Smut Action!
;D
<3

be_ddelusionall January 9 2013, 05:17:04 UTC

yes yes he is, so freakin' lucky

glad you like it! ♥