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chocolet89 May 9 2011, 04:54:59 UTC
ashhgasdfnlas TRUST ME TO BE AFK WHEN U UPDATE HNNGL;ASJDFLKSAJDF SMUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

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chocolet89 May 9 2011, 05:59:56 UTC
ASLKFJASLD NOOOOOOOOOOO I DON'T WANT THIS TO END T^T /sobs

The ending was actually quite nice :) I guess it'd be too perfect if the brothers managed to escape back to their planet *sighs* But this way at least they both get pleasure from being Jae's pet slaves still XDD (or well we all know that Junsu does anyway LOL)

I'm glad Jae's relented on them both a bit (I know he has a soft side for them somewhere in his heart XD) ~ he even gave them pretty piercings and tattoos *O* The pain had almost disabled Ho-pet, but Su-pet, his little masochist, had come three times under the tattooist’s needle. alksdfjsadf this!!! Omfg Junsu is srsly such a slut LOL meanwhile his poor brother is all laskdjfsdf so vulnerable HNNGALSKDF WHY DO I FIND THAT SO HOT LOLOLOLOL 8D

And u included Yamapi *O* I fell in love with him after reading your Creatures of the East fic XD Jae's definitely smart to keep the brothers as a way to help him profit in his business ^^

Ahhh still sad that this fic has come to an end >< and no sequel too /sobs but like I said ( ... )

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chocolet89 May 9 2011, 11:13:25 UTC
Ugghhh I just had to reread this chapter again T^T I'm srsly going to miss this sfm ~~~ and I just have to say this ...

The love they have for each other is just so strong and beautiful ♥ even after all they've been through, Junsu still tells Junho to never give up hope >< their will to live on for each other, knowing that they probably won't be able to go back to their world ever again is just alskjflksafd so touching T_________T

and I just notice this bit: Junho muffled his laughter on Junho’s shoulder. supposed to be Junsu's shoulder? :D

Uggghalskdf why do my comments resemble essays OTL

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be_ddelusionall May 11 2011, 21:55:05 UTC
all good things must come to an end, i'm sorry :(
and yeah, that would have been too perfect!
Junsu is def a slut, and you find it so hot because it is SOOOOOOO HOT :)

Yamapi makes a great mob boss, I think :)

and yeah, sorry sorry, no sequel
glad you loved it so much though! *hugs*

Isn't the poster gorgeous??? ponyboy always does such a great job! ♥

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mein_angel May 9 2011, 05:06:33 UTC
smut!!!

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mein_angel May 9 2011, 05:26:55 UTC
mwahahaha
that was so good in it's own very very twisted way!!
trust su to make good of their slavery kekeke
and jae to make good use of them ^_^
but what happen with changmin....?

(love the poster btw)

bizou

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be_ddelusionall May 11 2011, 21:56:51 UTC
thank you! i'm really glad you like the end of it!

changmin ... um ... oops. He flew home to you, and you made him your slave :) ... is that good?

(IKR! so sexy!)

*bizou

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mein_angel May 12 2011, 01:56:41 UTC
omgomgomgomg! really you give him to me...
*faint*
ok try to breath.....HEEELLLOOOOOOOOOOOO SEXY ....
*grab changmin*
be back in a week ... or not ;)
Bizou

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ichigojae May 9 2011, 05:17:34 UTC
Sadistic Jaejoong is awesome!!! Enough said xDDD I think the ending is fine.

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be_ddelusionall May 11 2011, 22:01:56 UTC
*grins* yes yes he is
thank you! glad you like it! ♥

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be_ddelusionall May 11 2011, 22:02:12 UTC
thank you! glad you like it!

*giggles at your icon* ♥

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rabanitchas May 9 2011, 05:27:44 UTC
This is an awesome end! Happier than I had imagined. When I read the first chapter I thought that Junsu, or Junho, would end up killing Jaejoong after freeing their planet and Changmin would execute them! This is a lot happier, and I really can't wait for Tears Of The Poors.

PS: now our breath play ended, we have to find another game to play! *grins*

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be_ddelusionall May 11 2011, 22:02:56 UTC
oh wow, really? you thought that? no character death warnings, but yeah ... :)

glad you like it!

PS: I'm so exhausted. You should just massage me instead :)

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