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be_ddelusionall

Ripped Chords and Blue Jeans 3/?

Jan 23, 2011 13:42

Title: Ripped Chords and Blue Jeans 3/?
Pairing: Yoochun/Jaejoong
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: If they were mine, I would teach them how to play *pervs*

Summary: Yoochun is a piano instructor for children of the elite. When a bonafide prodigy lands on his piano bench, Yoochun falls hard

Warning: Underage sex. Yoochun is 24, Jaejoong is 15A/N: I sort ( Read more... )

genre: age gap, completed: ripped chords and blue jeans, pairing: jaejoong/yoochun, warning: underage, warning: drug use, rating: nc-17, genre: high school, warning: teacher student

Comments 72

naegastar January 23 2011, 20:43:34 UTC

piano smut~

naegastar January 23 2011, 21:19:15 UTC

Chun's song was so sad T^T And then there's Jae and that mask of his...*needsnextchapterneedsnextchapter*

be_ddelusionall February 1 2011, 20:12:23 UTC

i cried writing it
glad you like it!
♥

julili January 23 2011, 20:44:44 UTC

smut to the butt

abcdefghiluvyou January 23 2011, 22:40:57 UTC

eyyyyyy DDD:

julili January 23 2011, 23:56:42 UTC

What?

melmel9095 January 23 2011, 20:57:25 UTC

This made me cry a little. :[ Poor Jae.
'“Were you raped?” Jaejoong suddenly asked.' Hinting something there?
Cant wait for the next chapter! :D

be_ddelusionall February 1 2011, 20:12:41 UTC

*hugs* me too
glad you like it! ♥

jae_sexual January 23 2011, 20:58:13 UTC

smut 8D

jae_sexual January 23 2011, 21:51:32 UTC

well it was at least close ^^

god i really want to hear yoochun sing like this all the time

and the yoochun/jaejoong dynamics are really nice ... i would like to hear their 'behind story'
♥

be_ddelusionall February 1 2011, 20:13:19 UTC

can you imagine Yoochun deep gravelly voice singing lyrics like that

glad you like it darling! ♥

mein_angel January 23 2011, 21:08:54 UTC

smutt

mein_angel January 23 2011, 21:29:32 UTC

this fic make me ..... calm ? like someone cook you comfort food when you are a little sick?
the relation between them is intense, but at the same time not rushed... yoochun is really trying to help him instead of just wanting in his pant.
i like how yoochun told the girl how to be around her crush, that was nice of him and pretty accurate.
i like how from fic to fic the boys stay the same but have so many personality.
sorry i'm not making any sense lol
i'm not incoherent from smut this time but from lack of word to express my feeling ^_^
guess that mean you're doing a good job
(oh and very very good sad song, my heart broke a little for yoochun there)
bizou

be_ddelusionall February 2 2011, 00:59:19 UTC

makes you calm? huh, it probably won't keep doing that

you are making perfect sense, darling

thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! ♥