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FIC: Ink & Wash (for noblealice) - NC-17

Dec 27, 2012 20:21

Title: Ink & Wash
Author: bob5fic
A Gift For: noblealice
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language; violence; sexual themes
Pairings: Clint/Natasha
Summary/Prompt Used: What is our story now? In the aftermath of a mission, Natasha decides on a different route.
Author’s Notes: I was inspired by a request to have Natasha in stockings and suspenders (and for them to remain on ( Read more... )

fanwork: natasha-centric, fanwork: angst, secret santa 2012, fanwork: hot under the collar, fic

Comments 8

hiddencait December 29 2012, 05:25:40 UTC

*guh* Oh good lord and I hardly ever even like 2nd person POV but damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnned if it didn't work out for me here. "Clint Barton makes you orgasm. There is your story."

... damn lol

crazy4orcas January 5 2013, 03:40:15 UTC

Edgy and sexy, I like it. Very nicely done. I've read it a few times and found something new to like each time.

This bit really hit me:

My body is a weapon. It is a tool. I want to feel more than this. Death has lost its luster. What does it feel like to live?

inkvoices January 9 2013, 23:43:05 UTC

Gorgeous, gorgeous writing style and turns of phrase, all with bit to it, all with sharp edges. Guh. Of course now I know that it's you it loses a bit of that surprise factor, because of course the writing in this is gorgeous ;D

I LOVE that Clint asks, and that everything they say seems so...not blunt so much, straightforward? Easy? And yet there's so much behind what they're saying, that whilst Natasha thinks Clint will give it no more meaning that the meaning it deserves there's the whole but what is the meaning and what is the story going on. It feels like they're on the edge of something else, balanced ready to topple, and how did you even write that in there?!

We are made of paper and surrounded by fire. made me think of a song by Dessa, and the continuing reference to 'a story' and that story happening now and the feel of the relationship between them made me think of it even more: "If you're asking I can't say no/just one more chapter, our book won't close/I know it's madness to play these odds/like giving matches to ( ... )