Fanfic - Sed de Sangre - Sparrington

[be_a_clover]

This is a story I write just for fun, so there will be no regular updates nor is this fic beta-read. Oh, and it's in German because it's my mothertongue and my English is too bad to write so much in this language - sorry
;P

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Titel: Sed de Sangre - Blutdurst

Comments

[saturnine3]

*sigh*

I wish I know what you are talking about. I love to read Sparrington.

=D

[be_a_clover]

I'm really sorry for that, bt as I said I think my English is much too horrible - and because it's not my mothertongue I tend to use 'wrong' vocabs of words I don't know in English (I look for them in the dictionary but that pick the first one that sounds good and...maybe it's the right word but not the right vocab for this situation ^^")

But all in one it's about Sparrow becoming a bloodthirsty but indescribable sexy creature, who'll try to seduce one specific british commodore with his new attributes >D
(Did you ever read Bram Stoker's Dracula?)

Oh and how good are you in betareading?
If you won't vomit because of incredible grammar and time mistakes I may hire you ;P Well, or at least I could give it a try, though a good friend of mine is better in English than me, she's no native-speaker too and that could be a problem ._."

[saturnine3]

Actually, when I saw the title of your fic.. I was sooooooo intrigued to read it. Two apparent reasons; first, it's a Sparrington, second,because of the word 'sangre' .. I know that the word means blood on Spanish. So, my highly visual imagination starts to wander through the image of Bram Stoker's Dracula. I didnt know that this fic is somewhat about Dracula-ish kinda Sparrington

[be_a_clover]

I was inspired by a player of this monstersgame some time ago (an online browsergame about werewolves and vampires) and he was called "Sed de Sangre" - he also told me what it means =)
I hope that the grammer is right, though I had italiano at school - many years ago - I never had spanish but I guess the sentence construction is right ^^" Well, at least I hope so =(

Hm...until I finish this story in English, you'll be able to talk German - maybe but I'll ask SmithKingsley =) I thin ... o,O

I'm not sure if it's normal but I like blood in an erotical way (not in real life - it tastes blae) ... but in vampire-stories I think it's nice =)

So what's your first language? Sorry for being curious ^///^ and you're a teacher? Coool *+* I wanna be a teacher too (not for art, but for biology/geography)

[badfaithx]

I always thought Jack would make an excellent vampire- it would combine my two favorite things, Sparrington and Anne Rice xD

If your still interested I could possibly beta for you, my English is presentable because I write articles for my media club, and I like writing in general. English is my only language.

[be_a_clover]

I was surprised to see that no one has already combined these two things, but well =( It seems that this is now up to me x'D

I'm still looking for a beta-reader and if you're a native-speaker it would be the best =)

Mrr <3

[badfaithx]

I'd be more than happy to look over and critique the translation- I do mucht he same in my Media club all the time, I've never beta'd for anyone but I assume that's what it means. xD

Re: Mrr <3

[be_a_clover]

Yep, it's some kind of reading it and then telling the author qhar crap he has done x'D
I've asked SmithKingsley for the beta already - I haven't thought of her first, but she already beta-read a very-short-story of mine soooo I hope you don't mind
*bows*

Re: Mrr <3

[badfaithx]

Ah okay, well I'll just eagerly be waiting to read it then >3