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desertport April 19 2014, 02:46:43 UTC
Though not prone to romantic gestures, Natasha didn't resist purchasing the necklace with the arrow charm when she happened upon it. She developed a fantasy daydream: Clint waking at last, opening his eyes for the first time after their disastrous mission.... She didn't need the necklace to remind her of him, but she wanted him to see it and know that he had been with her.

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sweetwatersong April 19 2014, 02:55:24 UTC
That last line is perfect

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desertport April 19 2014, 03:07:38 UTC
Thank you! I like how the 3-sentence limit forces us to say a lot in just a few words. Something I should remember to do in my writing in general.

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alphaflyer April 19 2014, 04:19:40 UTC
YES. Economy is a wondrous thing!

(And in a three-sentence ficathon, so are semi-colons, colons and parentheses ...) ;-)

PS: Loved this! :-)

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desertport April 19 2014, 07:52:33 UTC
Punctuation is our friend!

And thank you! <3

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philstar22 April 19 2014, 02:57:39 UTC
Yay. I love it. So much feeling. And I love that she's the one who bought it for herself with him in mind.

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desertport April 19 2014, 03:08:51 UTC
Thank you! <3

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crazy4orcas April 19 2014, 23:22:20 UTC
Oh, the feels! :)

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desertport April 20 2014, 03:34:46 UTC
Thanks! Clint and Natasha hit me in the feels so much. <3

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