Re: fic: Hurry Up And Wait, Teen, No Warningscrazy4orcasFebruary 16 2013, 23:07:48 UTC
This was fantastic! I love the moments you chose and I love Steve's insights into Clint and Natasha. Everything flowed really well too.
This part really struck me:
Pepper, keeping everything on track, fussed a little with Natasha's hair and handed her an armload of flowers to carry. Steve could be honest and admit that he'd zoned out during the more involved discussions about which flowers would be best--who knew different flowers meant different things?--but he remembered the conclusion, which was that Natasha would carry them all, because she couldn't narrow it down to just one kind of love. Steve didn't think he was the only one who'd gotten a little quiet after that.
Re: fic: Hurry Up And Wait, Teen, No Warningstopaz119February 17 2013, 19:10:11 UTC
Thank you! I had this scene in my head of Pepper and Jarvis and weighing in on all the different flower meanings and Natasha just going for them all. Her bouquet doesn't match the Dior she's wearing but nobody cares. :)
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This part really struck me:
Pepper, keeping everything on track, fussed a little with Natasha's hair and handed her an armload of flowers to carry. Steve could be honest and admit that he'd zoned out during the more involved discussions about which flowers would be best--who knew different flowers meant different things?--but he remembered the conclusion, which was that Natasha would carry them all, because she couldn't narrow it down to just one kind of love. Steve didn't think he was the only one who'd gotten a little quiet after that.
So well done!
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