Moonrise, Chapter 1: The Beginning

[bcrebel]

Title: Moonrise
Pairing: Demi/Selena
Rating: PG-13/R (for blood/possible violence)
Chapter: 1/?
Summary: It's been nearly two years since Demi and Selena's friendship all but evaporated. Demi's brief and life threatening encounter with a world neither of them understands will bring them back together and change both of their lives forever.
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[aubztastik]

Wow. I will admit, I honestly didn't know what to expect coming into this.. but you surprised me. It does seem vaguely like Ginger Snaps, on some levels, and that is a cool thing. I like the description of as Selena is leaving, Demi is hearing an engine she shouldn't be hearing normally. It gives an eerie sense to it and adds to the feeling that you know something is up.

[bcrebel]

I've actually never seen Ginger Snaps, lol. A lot of this is based off of the Buffy/Angel-verse take on lycanthropy, or just what I personally know about combined werewolf lore and am thus making up to fit my story.

I also like that you caught the car bit, that's what I was going for. There's small references and things like that throughout. Especially because it'll be a while before Demi herself figures out what's going on.

Thanks for reading :)

[we_all_fall]

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WOW.
This is so good.
And scary.
And cute (with the gayness).
MOAR, PLZ. :D