Fate Meets Destiny: Chapter Eighteen

[bbmgirlfan]

Title: Fate Meets Destiny 
Author: bbmgirlfan
Pairing: Ennis/Jack (AU/AU)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: just playing with the boys, they don't belong to me

Summary: Jack and Ennis grew up together and even went to the same college before moving back home to take over each family's business. They became roommates but that's all they were! Or, is it?

Comments

Come kiss me

[joetheone]

Oh I want the kissing bandit to come and kiss me but, I'm afraid I would pass out with pure delight. I really liked how they talked a little and then moved onto being friends and companions. Because well, that is what is the most important part of a relationship more then anything in the long run so why not keep building that up. And then to fall asleep together holding and just looking at one another what a wonderful thing. Joe

Re: Come kiss me

[bbmgirlfan]

I like the kissing bandit idea, too, especially if you know who it is. Kinda like role-playing in a way :).

I always enjoy your feedback, Joe! Thanks so much.

Jeanine

[lanie123]

Lovely and romantic chapter--although I find it hard to believe Ennis will be able to resist temptation while holding Jack in his arms in bed...

[bbmgirlfan]

"Lovely and romantic" -- how yummy!

Well, we'll have to see if he can resist...

Jeanine

[mrs_spamlad]

Hmmmm...could it be that Ennis has had some kind of turning point in his thinking about being with Jack? By the end of the chapter he seems somehow more open to Jack.
And I'm sure it won't hurt for him to wake up with Jack in his arms!
Great chapter- and great costume switch for Ennis!
Thanks,
Jill

[bbmgirlfan]

Hmmmm...could it be that Ennis has had some kind of turning point in his thinking about being with Jack?

Hmm. Good guess! :)

Thanks for your great feedback.

Jeanine

[denim_girl2006]

Awwwwwww, that was very sweet at the end. I really enjoyed "the kissing Bandit" and the Joker was a nice touch also. And for that matter, picturing Jack in his black hat and boots wasn't bad either. (I love Halloween anyway!) I liked this line, it kinda said it all:
"tension and heat and electricity shimmering in the air between them like bright rainbow colors."
♥ Keep up the good work! I thought we were about due for a chapter of this story! :)

[bbmgirlfan]

Thanks for your lovely feedback!!

Jeanine

[bentgyro]

And how will the kissing bandit wake Jack up in the morning?
Can't wait for more!
Thanks!
HT

[bbmgirlfan]

Hi, HT!

Well, I guess that's the question ... what will happen when they wake up?

Thanks so much for your encouraging feedback! I really appreciate it.

Jeanine