Oh dear! Every time I read a OS you've written I think "Ok THIS is the best one! It can't become better!". And then I read the next and think the same again. lol :'D
Don't worry about your mistakes! I even don't see them all as English isn't my mother tongue (guess I make much more mistakes than you ever could xDDDD).
Anyway... I LOVED IT... like always ♥_♥ Oh so beginning was so funny lol when Shachi came up with all that sex stuff and toys I couldn't stop laughing :'DDDD Just imagining little Shachi (I think he's the shy guy) in a sex shop makes me giggle. xD
Damn those tuxedos! I imagine Peng and Law looking so fucking hot when they're wearing them... with the masks! >///////< *nosebleed
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I love everything you say and I love how every time you call me it's like it's short story I love you too so much especially you I'm hoping that you and Wingchan can do the text Sedo's I was so totally love those photo shoots you to do but I know you're away for some time so hopefully when you come back you guys can do it lol
I've been training by one of the best even though she's not on line anymore she called the yaoi mistress Her sex scene were out of the world I wish I could be as good as she was and I wish you didn't stop writing but everything has to come to an end
When I write a sex scene more like a movie and I'm the narrator lol I tried to stay away from tearjerking scene because I don't think that's my strong point but if it was moved you to tears maybe I should start writing more tearjerking scenes lol I'm just so happy you guys love my stories I hope I can still keep writing for you guys I hope you guys keep warm I love you both
Second again, but I don't mind xDDDext_2729255September 4 2014, 12:13:11 UTC
Ly was faster again, but I don't mind, since I had read her scene before and needed a bit of time til I could read a sex scene after such a sad scene ;____; Still hearing these sad songs ♥
Now back to your OS. ♥ Shachi has great ideas xD He thinks about everything, so cool. I can't imagine Shachi in a Sexshop either XDDD I think he gets a nosebleed and would faint, just standing before one. :P He is a great buddy if he notices what Penguin desires most.
Oh man, Law and Penguin sure both look smoking hot in their suits *3* And so is the sex scene again. Damn hot ♥ >///< Law doesn't even wonder where Penguin got that sex toy XDDDD I love how caring Penguin is always after the sex. Cleaning Law up, after all he made the mess XDDDD So sweet how Law kisses him at the end ♥ And they confessing their love *3* I always imagine Penguin being the first one to say these words o///o
And what do we learn? Shachi should better read what he buys there XDDD
Re: Second again, but I don't mind xDDDbbhc18September 4 2014, 18:34:59 UTC
What did she kill somebody off I'm not curious about this Lol I want to put that I Shachi in a position where he's the one helping penguin is he's just standing by he's the mysterious friend that you never put anything past
You And Ly should do A Photoshoot when she gets Back I would love to see you two like this!
When your in the middle of freakn hot wild sex we don't question stuff like that
U2 wanted a more gentle scene and I guess right in I love you would be something I wouldn't do bc I like torturing my characters XD
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Don't worry about your mistakes! I even don't see them all as English isn't my mother tongue (guess I make much more mistakes than you ever could xDDDD).
Anyway... I LOVED IT... like always ♥_♥
Oh so beginning was so funny lol when Shachi came up with all that sex stuff and toys I couldn't stop laughing :'DDDD Just imagining little Shachi (I think he's the shy guy) in a sex shop makes me giggle. xD
Damn those tuxedos! I imagine Peng and Law looking so fucking hot when they're wearing them... with the masks! >///////< *nosebleed ( ... )
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I'm hoping that you and Wingchan can do the text Sedo's I was so totally love those photo shoots you to do but I know you're away for some time so hopefully when you come back you guys can do it lol
I've been training by one of the best even though she's not on line anymore she called the yaoi mistress
Her sex scene were out of the world I wish I could be as good as she was and I wish you didn't stop writing but everything has to come to an end
When I write a sex scene more like a movie and I'm the narrator lol I tried to stay away from tearjerking scene because I don't think that's my strong point but if it was moved you to tears maybe I should start writing more tearjerking scenes lol
I'm just so happy you guys love my stories I hope I can still keep writing for you guys I hope you guys keep warm I love you both
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Still hearing these sad songs ♥
Now back to your OS. ♥
Shachi has great ideas xD He thinks about everything, so cool. I can't imagine Shachi in a Sexshop either XDDD I think he gets a nosebleed and would faint, just standing before one. :P
He is a great buddy if he notices what Penguin desires most.
Oh man, Law and Penguin sure both look smoking hot in their suits *3*
And so is the sex scene again. Damn hot ♥ >///<
Law doesn't even wonder where Penguin got that sex toy XDDDD
I love how caring Penguin is always after the sex. Cleaning Law up, after all he made the mess XDDDD
So sweet how Law kisses him at the end ♥ And they confessing their love *3* I always imagine Penguin being the first one to say these words o///o
And what do we learn? Shachi should better read what he buys there XDDD
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Lol
I want to put that I Shachi in a position where he's the one helping penguin is he's just standing by he's the mysterious friend that you never put anything past
You And Ly should do A Photoshoot when she gets Back
I would love to see you two like this!
When your in the middle of freakn hot wild sex we don't question stuff like that
U2 wanted a more gentle scene and I guess right in I love you would be something I wouldn't do bc I like torturing my characters XD
Love you guys so much for commenting Muah!
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