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A World of Dreams and Nightmares (pt.9)

Feb 02, 2009 09:57

Title: A World of Dreams and Nightmares (pt.9)
Author: Moni_Mama
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Batman/Joker ( some implied Bruce/Rachel but nothing explicit)
Disclaimer: I don't own them sadly...cause if I did...they'd never be dressed or leave bed...<3 this is just for fun and cause my little mind is so very slashily warped. XD ( Read more... )

chaptered story: dreams and nightmares, author: moni_mama, genre: au, fanfic, rating: nc17

Comments 19

junkiefornews February 2 2009, 16:14:18 UTC

I love this fic. I absolutely the characterizations and the suspense.

Just a minor editing point:

"This was proving to be harder then usual as the other man would do two things, one be quite and two stop touching him."

I'm thinking you meant to say something more on the lines of:

"This was proving to be harder than usual as the other man wouldn't be quiet or stop touching him

Of course, you could say it more like this:

"Escaping was proving to be harder than usual, as Wayne wouldn't shut up or stop touching him."

or you could switch it around:

"As Wayne wouldn't shut up or stop touching him, escaping was proving to be harder than usual."

Anyway, I loved this chapter...love the story so far as well. Can't wait to read more. :)

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junkiefornews February 2 2009, 22:48:44 UTC

Oooh, a beta reader? By chance, you wouldn't happen to be available to beta read a Batman/Joker crossover (with the Marvel Universe) story? :)

Re: WELCOME BACK jokerluv February 2 2009, 17:18:21 UTC

My fingers are crossed, go get'em!!! YOU CAN DO IT!!! Which one is the one who want to go to?

Re: WELCOME BACK moni_mama February 2 2009, 18:34:08 UTC

Thanks!!! College of Saint Josephs. My grandmother went thar..kinda a family thing XD

Re: WELCOME BACK jokerluv February 2 2009, 18:42:48 UTC

very cool, lots of prayers!!! I know you'll knock'em dead!!!

whreflections February 2 2009, 18:31:33 UTC

I agree, that sex scene was just beautiful. The way you described the imagery of it was just so vivid! *happy sigh* But oh no, he's in love...which of course we all knew would happen but it's a surprise to him and he's...not going to be able to deal with this well, poor guy. Especially once they switch back...

And lol, poor other Bruce...must suck to keep trying to hug your 'best friend' and have them threaten to kill you. X.X

whreflections February 2 2009, 18:31:52 UTC

oh! and good luck with the school applications!!

dark_dreymer February 2 2009, 18:38:03 UTC

Soooooooooooooooo Joker is going to Wayne Manor? Sounds like a bad idea if he were to stumble across a certain secret cave XD Do I detect a little uh-oh parallel world travel accident?

I've had diet coke, so if I'm incoherent it's entirely my own fault. Great chapter :D

skyblue0291 February 2 2009, 20:04:21 UTC

Ooh I like this so far! I fell bad for Bruce! He wants to love Joker, Oh please continue ^^