Merlin - Nightmare's Reprise [Het- Morgana/Arthur, PG13]

Apr 24, 2009 20:13

Title: Nightmare's Reprise
Word Count: 220
Pairing: Morgana/Arthur
Prompt: The alphabet meme - 'You could be a sweet dream or a beautiful nightmare/Either way I don't wanna wake up from you...' for
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pairing: arthur/morgana, fic: merlin, drabbles, alphabetmeme

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borg_princess April 27 2009, 00:55:30 UTC
DUDE. You suck! You're all 'oh, new fandom this' and 'oh, nervous that' and then you come up with this gem!

I didn't know what to expect, but whatever speculations I had are vastly outdone by this piece. Prime example of quality over quantity, yo. I've read fics of a thousand words or so that don't convey the dynamics of the relationships you handled here- a bit of ship and the bonus Morgana/Gwen friendship! Yay!

I love the angst, and I love the hopeful note it ends on. I don't understand how you fit so much imagery and characterization into such a teeny fic- *envies the skill*- but it's wonderful. Thank you! ♥

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batgurl88 April 27 2009, 01:32:34 UTC
XD Really? Oh this makes me feel so much better - I really wasn't kidding about the nervousness regarding teh fic (I was convinced I'd completely missed the mark ship-wise and Morgana-wise). Thank you! <3 I'm very glad you liked it.

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borg_princess April 27 2009, 02:25:56 UTC
*coughcough* Oh, yeah, it was terrible, you know, I gotta sentence you to do about fifty more of these 'coz you really need to improve your skills and try to do better. *shifty eyes* GO NOW, WRITE. :P

J/k, of course. Unless this tactic works? In which case, go ahead... >:D

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archaeologist_d April 27 2009, 23:00:57 UTC
That was lovely. Loved the Morgana POV here. Well done.

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batgurl88 April 28 2009, 16:23:28 UTC
Thank you very much! I was nervous about my first Merlin fic, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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sunny_serenity April 28 2009, 00:09:20 UTC
batgurl88 April 28 2009, 16:23:59 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it.

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rivendells April 28 2009, 01:58:11 UTC
This was absolutely beautiful! I loved the imagery of this piece, and you captured Morgana's hope and despair perfectly. Fantastic!

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batgurl88 April 28 2009, 16:24:45 UTC
:D Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery, and that Morgana sounded right to you.

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batgurl88 April 29 2009, 01:14:42 UTC
:D Thank you! I'm glad.

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