spoken softly and swallowed whole

[batgirlblue]

california girl

Comments

[dissasterific]

I just saw this on mah girl Rachels (starcinders) friends list and I must say, that poem is truly a moving, emotional piece with such plays on words.

It hits home to me in a lotta ways, a truly personal piece that plays with the heartstrings. I love the lyrical descriptions. I fucken love it.

Truth be told, made me cry.

Fucken beautiful. I love it. Fucken love it.

... Okay, I'm done with teh spammage in your LJ. XD

[dissasterific]

Opps. My only critism would be why have you not wrote more?

[batgirlblue]

this is infinitely belated, but thank you so much for your comments. :-)