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Full Moon - She Who Hangs The Moon

Sep 30, 2010 12:59

Title: She Who Hangs The Moon
Universe: DCU
Genre: Humour
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing: Riddler/ Harley Quinn
Word Count: 500
Summary: Eddie's stakeouts are usually boring...

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theme 66: full moon, character: harley quinn, universe: dcu, character: riddler

Comments 4

alocin42 October 2 2010, 15:07:37 UTC

Aww, bless I do like a bit of Harley/Eddie flirtation! Particularly when it's 99% coming from Eddie and Harley seems blissfully ignorant. I loved his mixture of pleasure at her keeping him company but irritation with her scatty habits and his slightly stitled gentlemanly courtesy mixed with the earlier suggestive glances. Plus "cereal dials up the crazy" made me giggle quite a bit, along with Harley's Mom-like spitting on a napkin. T'was all made of win I do declare!

stagemystic October 3 2010, 05:17:05 UTC

Thank you for the lovely review! I love the idea of Harley/Eddie. He knows she has a mind but it frustrates him if he thinks she's being lazy and not using it. Then she puts him off balance because she's so honestly affectionate. I think he adores her but is too tied up in his own issues to realize it. Then of course she's completely oblivious. It's a fun dynamic to play with.

quiet__tiger October 3 2010, 16:33:59 UTC

Yeah, that was a bright idea, bringing Harley on a stakeout... :P He must really like-like her.

Her look dropped the ambient temperature a few more degrees

Loved that line, and the last one.

stagemystic October 4 2010, 03:26:07 UTC

I think Eddie's figured out it's easier to say yes to Harley than to argue. If he said no she'd just crash in later at the worst possible time... ^_^
That and he does enjoy her company, and the bickering, but he's not going to admit it. Thanks so much for the review!