I thought Katrina was great. The other two were good, and I think you really have something, but for some reason that I cant really put my finger on, I thought the second one was just fantastic.
Were these for classes or just poems you decided to write?
um....they were all kinda written for my poetry class, but mostly they were just me writing. i didnt turn any of them in, but we need to fill up our writing notebook by the end of the semester.
I learned more by reading Katrina than by anything you ever said about it to me. The image of Andre playing his disappeared guitar is very powerful. Thanks for sharing these. Yo mama.
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This time of year
When we're mad at life
Don't shed a tear
Go on with the strife
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