Game Changer - Chapter 33/35

Sep 08, 2015 22:13

Category: Slash - Dan (Ashcroft) & Jones
Rating: M
Summary: Things for Jones are looking bleak and Dan's just struggling to cope
Warnings: intense emotion, alcoholism, medical stuff, mention of death
Word count: 4261

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chapter 33, nathan barley, dj jones, fanfic, dan ashcroft, game changer, jones, dan and jones, dan/jones

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littleredchucks September 9 2015, 11:11:46 UTC
Why are you trying to destroy me with emotions and love and sads and fear and beautiful wonderful Dan/Jones love?!
By which I mean, this is lovely and lovingly written and I adore it. You've captured his fear and need and love beautifully and the whole chapter has a wonderful flow and perfectly executed ending.
Just so thoroughly well done, love, truly. I'm going to have to read it again cos it's just fabulous. I'm a bit desperate for a happy ending but really I'll take whatever you give me. Thank you for this marvellous chapter. xx

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basooniverse September 9 2015, 17:26:31 UTC
You are far too kind to me Chucks, you really are. Thank you so SO much for this comment & sorry for your emotions! (Although, I think we both thoroughly dead each other with the feelings) Your approval on this story and your support are so incredibly valued, so thank you thank you! I could thank you forever, but I'll save you having to read that ;). I may have got teary eyed reading this, which is a bit awkward seeing as I'm currently in a biology lab. XX

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worriedeye September 9 2015, 11:37:34 UTC

Heartwrenchingly beautiful. It makes every emotion I'm capable of feeling ripple and eddy and crest and break and crash. Xx

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basooniverse September 9 2015, 17:19:46 UTC
You are a marvelous human being <3 Thank you so so so so much. This comment is more well written than this chapter, but thank you. It really means the world to get comments like this & I hope you could enjoy this chapter even with the many emotions it inspired Xx

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