Fic: Things I Almost Remember [1/2] McDanno; PG-13

Jul 06, 2011 22:46

Title: Things I Almost Remember
Author: basket_ofposies
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Danny wakes in the hospital with no memory of Steve or Five-0 and it hits Steve harder than anyone else.
Word Count: 5048
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
A/N: So I seem to have a habit of writing things that aren't WIPs I really want to ( Read more... )

two-shot: things i almost remember, fandom: h50, fanfiction, pairing: steve/danny

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huntress69 July 7 2011, 03:08:52 UTC
I so love reading (and occasionally) writing amnesia fics, I have a wip of my own in this fandom and there is something about characters learning about each other all over again that makes their relationships extra special. I so loved Kono, I so see here like that over Steve and Danny, Chin was so mellow as always, and Grace, is totally awesome.

Looking forward to the next part and I hops soon.

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basket_ofposies July 7 2011, 11:47:42 UTC
Is your WIP posted? I'd love to read it! I'm a big fan of amnesia fics because as you said, it just makes the relationship that much more special.

Also, thank you so much for reading :) The next part might take a while since I want it to be just as long as this one.

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huntress69 July 7 2011, 18:52:46 UTC
Nope, not posted, as it is only part of the way done. I won't begin to post until it is almost, if not completely, done. I don't want to get stuck in the lurch as I have been on WIPs in the past.

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basket_ofposies July 8 2011, 20:22:51 UTC
I can't wait to read it when you post it :)

And I know what you mean! I always intend to finish a story but then life gets in the way and the next thing I know, it's been 6 months and I haven't updated and no one's happy :( I'm hoping that I've dropped the habit this time around

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bandbfan July 7 2011, 06:04:05 UTC
wonderful, wonderful piece. Loved your Danny and the kicked puppy, Steve, poor thing!
Krazy Kono was awesome and loved how Grace just couldn't keep a secret!
Loved Chin's "I don't wanna think about it".
Totally cringed when Steve told Danny the story of Chin and Kono catching them in the act :\
Can't wait for more,
Thanks for writing and sharing

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basket_ofposies July 7 2011, 12:44:59 UTC
Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm happy to hear you like it :) And hopefully the next part won't take too long

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verob2002 July 7 2011, 15:55:56 UTC
Awesome story!!! Please continue...Poor Steve, but Danny is doing great!

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megaranight July 7 2011, 09:33:39 UTC
I love your story and I can't wait for more! I hope Danny is going to remember Steve while doing more romantic and hot things with him. You got the characters so well, McDanno of course and Chin and Kono and I can perfectly picture Grace acting like this if her dad was in a relationship with Steve.
Please more.

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basket_ofposies July 7 2011, 12:43:08 UTC
That's the plan! :) I could never leave Danny without a memory of him and Steve for too long. I'm glad that all of the characters are in character. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

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tmelange July 7 2011, 11:39:52 UTC
Is the last sentence missing a word. Ended sort of strangely there. In any event, I've been dying for an amnesia fic, and here it is! You did an excellent job with this story. I can't wait for more. I want to see them fall in love all over again, it's so romantic. :)) Bravo!

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basket_ofposies July 7 2011, 11:52:32 UTC
I did miss a word! Thank you for pointing that out. I fixed it now.

I was surprised that I hadn't read any amnesia fics, so hopefully I just started a trend hehe... And I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I loved writing it and I can't wait to start the next part.

Thank you for reading and commenting :)

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bfive0 July 7 2011, 11:51:51 UTC
That was great!!! Danny still being himself, steve <3 can't wait for the next part.

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basket_ofposies July 7 2011, 12:45:22 UTC
Thank you so much! The next part shouldn't take too long, hopefully

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