Danger - Keep Away

May 18, 2012 14:22



Title - Danger-Keep Away
Genre - Songfic, hurt/comfort
Characters/Pairing: Rayne.
Summary: It's the only way they can feel anything.   
Author's notes: Up late one morning listening to my i-pod. Slipknot's Danger-Keep Away came on and this is what came to mind. I do recommend you listen to the song to get to feel of it more, but you don't have to. Beta ( Read more... )

river tam, oneshot, jayne cobb, firefly, hurt/comfort, smut, rayne, 2012

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goddessofbirth May 18 2012, 13:27:06 UTC
Oh my, it's been so long since I've read any Rayne! My babies!! It's always such a struggle between the two of them, isn't it? Because Jayne never wants to give in but he can't help it, and River may not like it, but she understands their inevitability.

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basched May 18 2012, 13:34:58 UTC

Hey G!

I feel the same way...recently I haven't had the inspiration to write Rayne, but when I heard the song...i had to write it!

It is always a struggle between them but they work! XD

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freddiejoey May 18 2012, 14:16:25 UTC
Hey, this is great!

Reading this was the perfect way to end my birthday!

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basched May 18 2012, 15:39:54 UTC
Aw thanks lass!! :)

I'm pleased that it was a good high to the end of your happy day! XD Sweet!

I hope that what I'm (still) writing for you as a pressie, will be just awesome!

Cheers! Diolch!

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cedelede May 18 2012, 14:21:45 UTC
“I understand…but you’ll still die right next to me. In the end.”

That is SUCH an awesome line. Loved it!

I've missed Rayne's particular brand of conflict. <3

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basched May 18 2012, 15:42:01 UTC

Thanks Merc! Although I cannot take credit for Mr Corey Taylor's lines, even if it is perfect for River. I shall have edit the headers and make that disclaimer!

Chars!! XD

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raynesupreme May 18 2012, 17:59:13 UTC
"Jayne didn’t want to admit that she had crept inside of him." Great line.

Wow! I loved this! Please listen to more songs that make you want to write some Rayne!!!! Can't wait to see more!

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basched May 19 2012, 06:43:38 UTC

Thank you very much! lol and I shall certainly try. As my i-pod is on random shuffle it depends what comes along!

fingers crossed!

Thanks again for reading!

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eneumann May 18 2012, 20:56:42 UTC
This was awesome, b! A very realistic portrayal of their relationship. :)

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basched May 19 2012, 06:44:20 UTC

Thanks luv!! Glad you liked!

Adore your icon btw!! XD awesome.

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