Ciaran's Lament

[barriequark]

Three more pages written on my novel this morning, which is actually now shorter than it was before. Sigh. I was reading through it and realized that my prologue was too long and tried to do too much. I am going to have it as a seperate short story for somewhere else and just start the novel where I had it originaly. Big sigh. It has more power and

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[mirli]

Oh no, camels look suspicious nowadays. Llamas are easier to acquire and more amusing. (Even though people enjoying the show might not like the spitting. Good llamas swallow.)

[barriequark]

LOL. Yes, but good camels go down. Sigh, sorry, couldn't resist.

[mmyrtle]

"Be careful what you ask for..."

[barriequark]

ROFLMFAO

Kate, you are sick and wrong. It's one of your better qualities.

[mmyrtle]

Hey, I may not be around very much these days, but at least I know what's important.

*smirk*

[barriequark]

Yeah, damn you for having a life. *snorfle* I miss the jokes.

[ajat]

*Snorfle* Humphrey GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !! That man ROX !

[barriequark]

He was a god. I have to put up a shrine to him somewhere.

[wandlimb]

Three more pages written on my novel this morning, which is actually now shorter than it was before. Sigh. I was reading through it and realized that my prologue was too long and tried to do too much.

That sounds familiar. ;) You know how many times I rewrote my beginning. My advice is don't muck around with the beginning now...write the rest of the novel and then muck around with the beginning. That's what I've been doing for two years, but at least the novel will be finished.

And, yay! for Bogie. He's so cute.

[barriequark]

Yeah, I am ignoring the beginning right now. I am far too tired of looking at it to be able to see it clearly. :P