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barkeep

Challenge Fic - SPN

Mar 15, 2007 21:59

Title: Between Dust and Blood
Fandom SPN
Rating: R for language, m/m relationship
Disclaimer: Not mine, sadly, not mine
Summary: At the edge of town, two men sit on a porch and watch nothing; waiting to die.A/N: Written for the "From Ashes..." Supernatural fic-a-thon. I had #29 - Rise Against “Dancing for Rain”. Beta provided lovingly and with ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

mgbutterfly March 16 2007, 06:18:22 UTC

Dude. You never cease to floor me with your writing.
Even your tense issues are awesome.
This is so fucking beautiful it hurts.
It's like staring into the sun in sub-zero temps while driving hot pokers into your heart.
But I mean that in a good way.
There are so *so* many things I love about this. So many lines that hook my soul.
And you know what they are.
Christ. It's just. Awesome.

barkeep March 16 2007, 18:38:21 UTC

Dude. My tense issues are not awesome! Argh! So. Many. Issues. But, yeah, so I'm glad *you* liked it.
And damn you for making me think of turning it into a chapter epic. Damn you!

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barkeep March 16 2007, 17:11:16 UTC

No, no, thank *you* for creating the challenge. It always helps to have a deadline.
:-)

not_sally March 23 2007, 07:57:32 UTC

Ok, this is so awesome. The pacing alone is simply wonderful, but that, on top of the final battle how you wrote it, and how broken they are left, and in typical blind manlyWinchester fashion they can't realize they are sort of ok because they are together and I can't stop waxing poetic. *sighs*
What I mean to say is: loved it.

barkeep March 26 2007, 05:21:08 UTC

Squees!
This is the first kind of disjointed timeline fic I've attempted; I'm so glad you liked the pacing! Thank you so much for your lovely review. It really gave me a boost on a crappy day.
:-)
I raise (and drink) a Purple Nurple to you!