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Changes Wrought: Chapter 7/?

Nov 15, 2009 23:51

Changes Wrought 7/?

By: bargara-b

Fandom: Devil Wears Prada (film)

Pairing: Miranda/Andrea

Rating: PG-13 to R

Disclaimer: Honestly? Not mine.

A/N: I am not a writer nor can I claim any expertise in fashion, journalism, medicine, psychiatry, rescue operations, or teenaged girls (though I do have one of those they remain a mystery).

Thanks to Radak for the ( Read more... )

pairing: andy/miranda, fandom: dwp, rating: pg-13

Comments 68

radak November 16 2009, 07:57:19 UTC

great chapter! I like it!

bargara_b November 16 2009, 16:15:21 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad.

styx63 November 16 2009, 08:25:55 UTC

Thank you for the new chapter. I really like this story.

bargara_b November 16 2009, 16:16:17 UTC

I'm so pleased you like it and I really appreciate you lettting me know. :)

jintymac November 16 2009, 09:18:00 UTC

This was a great chapter :D

I loved the disbelief of Andrea and her mother when they saw a completely different Miranda in her own home but it was so sweet. Miranda offering Andy help this way is going to be very interesting for everyone concerned I think ;-)

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

bargara_b November 16 2009, 17:47:48 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! I glad you're enjoying the story! I am worried about making Miranda too sweet...I've always thought that was a road to total unbelievability. Hopefully, a nice balance can be struck. ;D

pure_ecstasy6 November 16 2009, 11:24:10 UTC

This was great. I knew that's what Miranda was going to say at the end for Andy to move in to help out with Caroline and all. This is getting very interesting cos now here's a great way to get together!=) Thanks so much for writing, I will be patiently waiting with baited breath for your next update. =)

bargara_b November 16 2009, 17:52:28 UTC

Thanks! I thought (was afraid) it was a little too predictable but then decided I didn't care! lol I'm hoping, time pending, to have the next chapter up in about a week or so. Thank you so much for your comments!

vainscheinker November 16 2009, 13:06:06 UTC

Very nice story, I really enjoyed the description of MIranda´s swimming routine, I could really picture it.
Hope to read more soon!

bargara_b November 16 2009, 18:08:52 UTC

I'm so relieved that scene worked for you. I came very close to deleting it but liked a few of the lines so kept it! Thank you so much for letting me know and thanks for reading.