Audience

[dreamer_believe]

Title: Audience
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Characters: Peter/Jason
Summary: The school goes to a party, this is what happens at the party, and the day following said party. Enjoy
Notes: While I was writing this I was suddenly bothered by the fact that ‘Peter’ is such a bazaar name. And I’m not saying that in a bad way, but I was just staring at his name for

Comments

[shannonsims]

Peter Peter Peter Peter Peter Peter Peter. Oh my God, you're right! It does seem strange after a while! Plus, all of the letters or on the same line on the keyboard. Eugh...I hate it when that happens to words longer than three letters. But Peter's my favorite, so it's ok.

As much as I love love love fluff, I like a little bit of angst every once in a while. I loved the parts where Peter was finishing sentences in his brain...I do that ALL the time. Angsty!Peter is always pretty interesting to read because no matter what there's still that unconditional love for Jason beneath it all, even though sometimes that's exactly what fuels the angst.

But anyway, awesome job! I liked it lots!

[moonlightmania]

You know, after awhile of saying "Peter, Peter" it started sounding like "Pitter, Pitter," like how the rain "pitter-patters" on the sidewalk? You know? Okay, nevermind.

I really loved this! I like how Peter finishes the sentences in his mind, and I loved how (for example) Ivy's interruptions entered his thoughts for his moment, instead of being written as dialogue. Awesome! <3

Aww. <3 I love unloved Peter, since he's just so cute and loves Jason underneath it all. Adorable!