*facepalm*

May 30, 2009 21:43


Dear Author of the romance novel I'm working on ( Read more... )

bad prose

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sartorias May 31 2009, 02:14:15 UTC
Urrrp. Sounds like someone is channeling Harlequin 1975, and not in a good way.

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aeriedraconia May 31 2009, 03:00:12 UTC
and Harlequin c. 1980. *gag*

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shana May 31 2009, 02:23:54 UTC
I can imagine a 20 year old not having had anything she recognized as sexual feelings -- but my imagination would be a late-blooming geeky type.

But when such a person finally notices that a guy is attractive to her, I would expect her fantasies to be about him kissing her, or possibly a little bit more than that.

It sounds like this author went too far in both directions.

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aeriedraconia May 31 2009, 03:07:18 UTC
I don't know what the deal is with romance novels. So many of them are not even close to any sort of romance I would like to have and they most certainly do not represent any romantic fantasy I have ever had.

Domineering control freak man? Uh no.
Rapist man? @($* NO!
Girl becomes incompetent as soon as she meets man? No.
Slut man? No.
They fall in bed during a heated argument? No, when my ex and I fought the last thing I wanted was o get in his pants. Slap him upside the head, maybe but not hop in the sack.

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kateelliott May 31 2009, 03:44:45 UTC

kouaidou May 31 2009, 05:57:10 UTC
Well, TMI time. I didn't experience a glimmer of a recognizable sex drive until I was out of college. I could imagine "what it would be like" to sleep with a person I liked but I never really felt anything about it in anything but an abstract sense. "Sex is supposed to be good, so that would probably feel nice to do with a person I like." I can't really explain it but one day I just discovered there were actually things that turned me on. In retrospect it was kind of weird, but everyone does kind of have their own thing going on.

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barbarienne May 31 2009, 06:07:48 UTC
The variety of human experience never fails to amaze me!

I hope your situation wasn't the same as this character's though. (I didn't read thoroughly, but I started to get the impression there was some sort of psychological baggage/very repressive upbringing that created the situation.)

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kouaidou May 31 2009, 06:24:01 UTC
Thankfully, no. I think I was actually kind of self-repressed. Most everyone else in my family developed early in that sense as far as I know. I'm not sure if it was a chemical thing or what, but I just never went in search of porn or eroticism the way it seems to be assumed that people of that age do.

That said, my brother actually may be/have been the same way, as he's never expressed interest in girls (or guys) in the time I've known him. So if he ever developed a sex drive he's been very private about it.

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