Letters Home: Correspondence 6/17

[bar_ohki]

            “So who’s the girl, Sena?” Juumonji demanded during breakfast that morning. The company was sitting together in the mess tent waiting for orders. Everyone was enjoying their gruel, well as much as one could enjoy gruel. To pass the time, Juumonji had taken to teasing the other members of the team (except Hiruma). Sena, the poor kid, was

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[dayofcaligula]

I still feel it quite weird for Hiruma to cry over this war depression, but indeed, this is war. Watching too much war films gets into me, hahaha. I like how Mamori's being sweet.

[bar_ohki]

I was told by my good Veteran friend that if you don't cry, they don't consider you human. Crying was apparently a very important part of the battle field.

So I included it.

I'm glad you liked what Mamori did. ^^

[honey_bee89]

Aww, poor Hiruma! He really needs a hug... *Packs up Mamori in a large box to ship to Hiruma* Wait a minute... I can't send her into a war zone! *Unpacks Mamori and packs up Hiruma instead* That's better... Now, what was the name of that coffee shop again? Hm...

Anyway, great job on the story so far! I love how Mamori had sent Hiruma her father's coffee. *Giggles* I can't wait to read Hiruma's reply to that bit of information. I'm almost positive that he'll tease her for it.:D

[bar_ohki]

Yes, Mamori does occasionally get herself into trouble for him. It makes Hiruma a happy man.

And as for the name of the coffee shop, I haven't given it one yet. Any suggestions?

[honey_bee89]

Yeah, it does. lol. I'm sure the thought of her sneaking away with her father's coffee will keep him entertained for some time (the same way he's entertained by her sneaking some creampuffs for herself. hehe).

And as for the name of the coffee shop... I really don't know. I'm not very good with those kind of things.^^'

[bar_ohki]

Then it shall continue to be vaguely referred to as 'her family's shop' until I find a better solution.

And yes, he's entertained.