The Things You Do

[banyangirl1832]

Sometimes you wake up in the morning and you just know in your bones that you should’ve gone back to sleep. Those times, Nora’s grateful to have the job she does. She can’t go back to sleep. People need dinner. She pulls on an old soft sweater, jeans, her denim jacket with the patches on the back. Thinks about brushing her hair but it’s greasy

Comments

[i_17bingo]

But she can still taste the sleep in her mouth...

I love that image.

This piece is moody and hints at the multitudes taking place under Nora's skin, making them fascinating. I would like to learn more.

[eternal_ot]

Ah! you left me hanging and I was hooked from the start. Welcome back :)

[bleodswean]

So open-ended! Definitely feel the struggle here.

[yuniebaby]

I like how the conciseness of this as a whole contrasted with all the stuff hinted at that Nora's thinking about. :)

[kajel]

Loved this. Moody was a good word for it.