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“Can you do it?”

“No. She's bleeding into her chest cavity. We need to get her to a hospital.”

The sirens were loud, screaming in her ears, and she tried to turn away from it only to be held short by hands and pain.

“Sir, what's the patients name?”

“Sophie.”

Eliot glared at him, elbowing him hard in the side. “Nate.”

He blinked, and shook his head

Comments

[anonymous]

I have to wait for more? Oh, the suspense is killing me! I love it! that's so sad!

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I don't do angst very well, but your prompt definitely begged for it.

Hopefully you won't have to wait long.

[acquariusgb]

That was intense!
Nate needs to man up and be there for his woman!!
Fantastic Job!

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Haha, hang in there, he'll come around. :)

[astridv]

Really good; it feels spot on how you dealt with the emotions.

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I'm glad it came off as genuine! I gotta admit, I'm putting all my anxiety about moving into this.