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Ficathon Entry: Ticket of Pain

Jan 28, 2006 00:46

Ficathon writing! Enjoy!

Title: Ticket of Pain
Author: bandbooktvworm
Rating: PG
Beta: None
Written for: itoe_nakashima
Assignment Number: 8
Assignment: Elements that must be included:1. All of the regular characters (that means no Mark or Stacy ( Read more... )

ficathon, house, writing

Comments 5

starry_night_53 January 28 2006, 10:51:13 UTC

really nice! i love snarky!House and the way they kiss in the end. and darkcameron is cool! hehe.

“Chase is pretty, too. Do you think I just hired you for your looks?”

“What is it with you and Chase? Do you have a crush on him or something?”

hahahaha!

cathiexx January 28 2006, 12:12:15 UTC

Such wonderful flow of dialogue. Very well done. House's voice was terrific; I could picture him saying the words perfectly.

(the critic in me does want to mention that Cameron did know when she married her husband that he was dying, though.)

Very nicely done! I enjoyed this, great work.

starhawk2005 January 29 2006, 14:05:57 UTC

“I…I couldn’t sleep.”
“So you decided to have someone else join you?”

*giggle*

Mmmm, kissage. ;)

lea724 February 1 2006, 03:01:48 UTC

That was my favorite line from it, too. :)

bandbooktvworm February 1 2006, 03:16:32 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you like, it's pretty much my favorite line, too. :D