CockbertBigBang fic - "It's Me, O Lord"

[banbury]

Title: It's Me, O Lord
Author: banbury
Artist: qafmaniacType: friendship, romance, AU

Comments

[janedavitt]

Might want to put it behind a cut, hon? ::hugs::

[banbury]

Thank you, posted it being asleep ::\ ::hugs back::

[casey270]

this has such a dreamy flow, and i love it. from the time the singer walked out, and Adam refused to replace him on stage, i wanted to grab him and shake him & tell him to do it! but you worked it out perfectly & with perfect timing.

and the interaction between your characters was so much fun to read. i love how the friendship between Adam and Tommy felt so natural, and how Adam and Sauli recognized something in each other immediately. i really loved how much strength and confidence you gave Sauli in this.

when you write your next fic tho, you might want to put an extra line between paragraphs. it makes it easier for the reader's eyes to track & keep place while reading. i know i'm not alone in doing most of my reading later at night or early in the morning, and it would really help my tired eyes. but whether you do or not, i can't wait to read more of your words.

[pensnest]

I really like the ideas in this story, and you've written a lovely friendship between Adam and Tommy. I very much enjoyed their scenes together. I think, though, that there are scenes you haven't included which I would have loved to read-the confrontation between Adam and Barry where Barry challenges Adam to do a better job, and Adam *does*, would be a great one (I mean, I know it's a bit of a cliché, but sometimes they're just so emotionally satisfying!); and later, after that lovely first meeting between Adam and Sauli (which is beautifully done, very atmospheric and sensual), I'd have liked to see a bit more about Adam's album coming out, and maybe even Sebastian's astonished reaction to the whole situation. And, perhaps, Adam's personal reactions to finding he's really a rock singer