Comments | banbury: Come you back to Mandalay, part IV and epilogue

banbury

Come you back to Mandalay, part IV and epilogue

Nov 15, 2010 21:04

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banbury March 19 2011, 00:31:02 UTC

Thank you!
I always thought Tony could match Gibbs in it and be really good, I thought 'what if he'd found his time in the academy not the waste, but the opposite, what would happen then...' and I tried to write it down, though it took me two Bigbangs :-)

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banbury March 19 2011, 00:32:25 UTC

Thank you! Me too ;-)

marmillady November 16 2010, 04:16:12 UTC

Wow, very intense and very different!! Really enjoyed the story!

banbury March 20 2011, 23:56:22 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I wanted it to be intense with confident Tony and I'm glad it worked :-)
I can't believe I let all this wonderful comments go unanswered for so long, I was so thrilled to read it.

adafrog November 21 2010, 23:33:32 UTC

Lovely, thanks.

banbury March 19 2011, 00:32:59 UTC

Thank you!

angst_queen_98 February 13 2011, 15:19:34 UTC

Nice ending! So glad that they found their way back to each other.

banbury March 21 2011, 00:36:56 UTC

Thank you! I wrote the end in the very beginning and than had to take a long way to connect that final scene I like very much myself being actually a romantic writer :-) with the whole idea of 'hot and confident SEAL Tony'. I'm glad you liked it!