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bananyphophany

Drabbles - KAT-TUN

Feb 26, 2008 19:53

Title: Fresh cut grass
Rating: G
Pairing: Akanishi/Kamenashi
Summary: Sometimes, when KAT-TUN has free time, Jin likes to go to the beach. Kame prefers the park.

( Kame would sit on the shore, sometimes pretending to read a book, sometimes listening to music, but always, always watching Jin closely. )

f: johnny's, p: akanishi/kamenashi, c: akanishi, x: gen, x: drabble, g: kat-tun, word count: 100~1000, c: kamenashi

Comments 6

freepureangel February 26 2008, 15:47:04 UTC

woah~!
I liked "Closed Eyes"
the descriptions were like perfect.
and yea..it'd be cool if we see ten million different colors when we close our eyes. XD

bananyphophany February 26 2008, 21:09:19 UTC

:) Thanks!!
XD It'd be cool right up to the point where you wanted to go to sleep. Then black would be preferable.

paddyabroad February 26 2008, 18:23:20 UTC

These sounds really nice ^^
Maybe you wanna try writing longer snippets?

bananyphophany February 26 2008, 21:10:18 UTC

Thank you~ :D
Sometimes I write longer ones. :) But I was in such a drabbly mood that night~~

kanintallrik February 26 2008, 20:45:30 UTC

I usually want to leave very long, encourageing and interesting comments.... but lately I have been so very very tired when reading fics......
so today I'll have to excuse myself. and just say that this - both of them - was very beautiful and nice.
tell me, english is your first language, right?

bananyphophany February 26 2008, 21:06:18 UTC

:) Thank you. It's cool, comments short and long, even one word comments, are appreciated.
Yeah, English is my native language. XD; Why? Did I seem somewhat... non-fluent in parts? :D;