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bananyphophany

One-shot - Undelivered Letter

Sep 04, 2011 12:24

Title: Undelivered Letter
Pairing: Masuda/Tegoshi
Rating: PG
Words: ~4,000
Warnings: Character death
Summary: AU. One day, Massu promises himself, he will give these letters to Tegoshi. Just not yet.

( I wanted to kiss you tonight. Maybe it was a bit forward of me to even think it, but I really wanted to kiss you. )

x: au, p: masuda/tegoshi, g: news, c: masuda, f: johnny's, c: tegoshi, x: one-shot

Comments 43

sugarytwinkle September 4 2011, 04:44:54 UTC

/crying/ Amazing. I didn't think I could be so shocked by character death ever. Even though I knew there would be a death. Totally speechless ;~;

I'll do my best to become happy for you. Please wait for me.
Those two lines were just so perfect.

bananyphophany September 4 2011, 04:48:53 UTC

Thank you. I was kind of not wanting to kill Massu by the end, but then I kind of remembered that was the point of the fic. XD;;;

Thanks very much. Writing Tegoshi's letter was actually kind of sad for me too. ._________.; Ahaha...

tegositi September 4 2011, 07:45:36 UTC

T____T you made Massu die T__T I like reading stories with character death actually but still T___T The last pharagraph of Tegoshi's letter is really sad.
Thank you for sharing.

bananyphophany September 6 2011, 11:48:18 UTC

T______T I know. Sorry Massu.
I'm glad it was sad... just because... you know. Success!!
No problem~

shingung September 4 2011, 11:38:02 UTC

im not really good with character deaths in fic..

but somehow..despite this one being sad..it is lovely..i like their letters...

thanks for sharing this..

bananyphophany September 6 2011, 11:49:24 UTC

Thanks for giving it a chance despite that, Bea♥
Yeah. It's meant to be bitter-sweet. Especially Tegoshi's last letter...
Thank you♥

enzeru_no_innen September 4 2011, 11:50:13 UTC

my tears are still falling as i type this comment... the story is amazing... and tegoshi's letter - i imagine him crying like a little boy as he writes it...

and the line, "And even if, at that time, we left a lot of things unsaid between us, it doesn’t make it any less precious." ~ how sweet...

bananyphophany September 6 2011, 11:50:39 UTC

Ahhhhh, sorry for making you cry!!! But thank you, I'm glad you read it and were touched by it.

enzeru_no_innen September 6 2011, 12:48:39 UTC

you may call me a masochist but i really love the story... i'll be happy if they stay together but i guess that's how your fic is supposed to be, right? continue making wonderful stories! ^-^

grydo2life September 4 2011, 17:45:17 UTC

=/ I think you're the ONLY writer on the face of this planet that could actually get me to read a fic with a character death warning attached.

Now excuse me. I need to go find a pillow to cry into for a while. Damn that was sad. But perfect.

お疲れ~♥

bananyphophany September 6 2011, 11:51:30 UTC

SORRYYYYY CICIIIII~ But I'm, uh... flattered? XD; Sometimes the urge to kill just arises.
No, not really. The ideas just happen sometimes. .___.

Thank you~♥