Is this speech supposed to be fact based? Most of the 3rd paragraph is your opinion of N*SYNC. I think it'd help if: 1. You used more facts. 2. The speech focused more one the positive side of BSB and less on the negatives of N*SYNC.
I thought the EXACT same thing...the 3rd paragraph is "I think" and anyone could come back and say "I disagree".
Find the quote where Justin said that the sounds in Celebrity changed because they "wanted to appeal to more people" because to me that means that they dont appreciate the fans that loved them for them and their music, and all they really cared about was how many people they could get to buy the CD. Compare that to when Brian said he'd pay any fines for the Atlanta station if they were sued for playing the leaked version of Incomplete...when Brian said "We don't make music for the record companies. We make music for the fans." Are we seeing a clear difference between the attitudes of BSB and NSYNC toward their music? Quotes are fact based..."I think JC and Justin do all the singing because they look good" is not.
The key to persuasive speeches and essays is to pull out the facts...opinions are different for everyone and carry no pull in the issue.
Sorry...Im the queen of debate around here! I don't me to be critical...
bsb is also better because *cough* all FIVE CAN ACTUALLY sing..lol..i can't agree with how you said that justin won fans by his looks..that would just turn me away..lol.
BSB were the first boyband of the 2, but definitely NOt the first boyband lol I would use more facts about BSB and why you think they are superior, instead of using reasons about N Sync
Like everyone else has said, find some facts to back up your opinions. Your opinions don't really hold any weight otherwise.. especially since all you're doing is dissing NSYNC.
Along with what everyone else has said, when you talk about the "hidden meaning" behind some of the *N Sync lyrics, you might want to put a few lines from a song or something... simply b/c not everyone is going to know those songs or catch on to what you're saying.
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1. You used more facts.
2. The speech focused more one the positive side of BSB and less on the negatives of N*SYNC.
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Find the quote where Justin said that the sounds in Celebrity changed because they "wanted to appeal to more people" because to me that means that they dont appreciate the fans that loved them for them and their music, and all they really cared about was how many people they could get to buy the CD. Compare that to when Brian said he'd pay any fines for the Atlanta station if they were sued for playing the leaked version of Incomplete...when Brian said "We don't make music for the record companies. We make music for the fans." Are we seeing a clear difference between the attitudes of BSB and NSYNC toward their music? Quotes are fact based..."I think JC and Justin do all the singing because they look good" is not.
The key to persuasive speeches and essays is to pull out the facts...opinions are different for everyone and carry no pull in the issue.
Sorry...Im the queen of debate around here! I don't me to be critical...
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I would use more facts about BSB and why you think they are superior, instead of using reasons about N Sync
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Also, it's JC Chasez, not Chazy.
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