[olderpeople!AU] Here Comes Your Man

Jun 04, 2012 13:46

Title: Here Comes Your Man
Fandom: Latin Hetalia.
Characters: Perú (Miguel)/Chile (Manuel).
Rating: T.
Comments: ... idk, FEELS MAN, this AU gives me lots of feels. Special thanks to zulenha for beta reading me and berseker for giving me concrit and advice. YOU ARE THE COOLEST BROS, GIRLS.
Summary: Miguel smiles like the sun and Manuel's knees buckle until he falls, ( Read more... )

pairing: perú/chile, character: perú, character: chile, fandom: latin hetalia

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melissa_42 June 4 2012, 19:33:40 UTC
FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK UUUUUUUUUUU WHYYYYYY

So when I first started reading, I was like awww, this is cute, I just wanna hug Manu and tell him that everything's gonna be ok BUT I DON'T HAVE TO BECAUSE MIGUEL WILL, and then as I had a huge smile on my face because everything was so warm and comfortable and homey and happy and then I got to the end. The last few sections were like a punch in the gut, but I forgive you because it was all so beautiful and emotional. u__u /sobs quietly

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ilye_aru June 4 2012, 23:45:48 UTC
I'M SORRY EXCEPT NOT REALLY EXCEPT MAYBE.

I'm glad you... sobbed like a baby, Meli. AND THANKS FOR COMMENTING, I REALLY APPRECIATE A LOT. Maybe you can go hug Manu now and licks his tears of doom 8(?

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Kasitas la princesa de PeChi /shot zulenha June 5 2012, 14:23:53 UTC
IT'S SETTLED THEN, this mortal/older/married/whatever!AU was created to make everyone CRY THEIR EYES OUT. (that wasn't my intention omg)

This was really amazing, Kasitas ;A;b They're such silly kids when they're young, and it all starts so CONFUSED but then they grow calmer and quieter and who'd have thought they could be this domestic (only you). It's so sweet but so sad dkjghlsh they had so many plans to grow old and wrinkly together and raise their boys and have a big happy family. Yeah okay they DID have that but. It wasn't enough, I can't get used to this DDDD8

I'm really glad we had that convo that time because BEAUTIFUL THINGS COME OUT OF THESE CONVOS

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OuO ilye_aru June 5 2012, 17:42:53 UTC
AAAAAAAAAAAAAA YOU ARE A TERRIBLE PERSON YOU STARTED THIS MASSIVE SOBFEST.

I'm a speshul snowflake, I like domestic things and people doing the laundry and babies and idk. BUT LIFE IS LIKE THAT, OKAY.

You are a terrible enabler and I love you for that.

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berseker June 5 2012, 21:29:25 UTC
... I still can't believe you killed him ;OOOO; YOU'RE SO CRUEL, KASSIBABY. But flsdhkf this was so, so sweet and touching and beautiful. I love how they go from silly kids to... even sillier kids but more in love ;3; and how Manu starts to get more trusting and Miguel more responsible and how their love grow and then HOW YOU DESTROYED EVERYTHING D8

It was painful. But it worked, and at least Manu survived, somehow ;3; and I don't know, it feels like... he knows he'll never have something quite like that, but he's not dispairing, you know? Because they'll be reunited IN HEAVEN. AS LITTLE ANGELS. And you can't tell me otherwise, so there.

(but the thing with the window still broke my heart in a million pieces)

this was great, Kassinha, and you're amazing and evil ;3;

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/DRAMATIC ENTRANCE melocotonisma June 6 2012, 23:11:01 UTC
Okay, Kasi, I would like you to know that my computer blue-screened midway through my comment from last time. |D

ANYWAY. I just had a lot of feels about this fic. The progression of their relationship, how they met, the way you broke it into snapshots--I always adore fics like this and this one was literally perfect. Your English gets better every single time I read it, and I'm just in love with the way you write Pechi ;A; (but you knew that already).

I cried like a little girl at the honeymoon line, too. I WAS NOT READY FOR MIGUEL TO DIE. MY BABY. QAQ I think I was listening to the most depressing song, too, so I think I'll just blame it on that.

I love this AU. I love everything about this pairing and this fic. I JUST HAVE A LOT OF FEELINGS. ;A;

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daniela_lynx June 20 2012, 05:25:12 UTC
Oh god I already told you of my feelings but it doesn't hurt telling you one more time HOW AMAZING THIS FIC IS,

OMG NO SERIOUSLY. IT'S AMAZING AND I LOVE IT TO DEATH. I want to hug all the characters, they're so precious, and the relationship is so sweet and OMG EVERYTHING IS SUPERB.

All my feels: You have them. OMG. <333333333333333333333

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