Comments | bam_otaliafan18: Dare to love (7/?)

bam_otaliafan18

Dare to love (7/?)

Nov 22, 2011 04:36

faberrittana, -fanfic, brittana, faberry

Comments 15

there_u_are November 22 2011, 05:28:03 UTC

this chapter is heartbreaking.. too much tears and emotions. i just hope things will turn out to be better soon. thanks for this chapter!

bam_otaliafan18 November 24 2011, 13:27:42 UTC

Thanks for the comment! :)

20kels November 22 2011, 14:07:21 UTC

ahhhh loved it! so much emotion and unsure santana! Heartbreaking but I love it!

bam_otaliafan18 November 24 2011, 13:28:00 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)

varconc November 22 2011, 14:53:44 UTC

Wow this is amazing so far. I've never really thought about the idea of polyamory before this, but this fic has gotten me thinking. It really is a very real situation that i don't doubt many people find themselves in, and you've written it really well. Your characterisation is wonderful, and more than that, the way you wrote their emotions is brilliant. I find myself feeling for Quinn and her struggle with her emotion, as well as S, B and Rachel. Really good fic that you've written here ( ... )

bam_otaliafan18 November 24 2011, 13:33:24 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad you like it and you approve of the fact that I'm taking things slow. I'm kind of reluctant to rush things by randomly putting them all in one relationship because I think doing that will make the whole thing seem ridiculous and unrealistic.

You're absolutely right about my sentence structure. The 'clunkiness' I produce annoys the hell out of me. I'll try to work on that but I'm no writer by any definition :/

Thanks again for the comment! :)

troubledaim November 22 2011, 19:17:35 UTC

Oh my goodness. You are killing me with these emotions! Poor Santana. I really love how you tapped into the Quinn/Santana conversation and Santana's struggle throughout. The ending... ugh *dies*. So heartbreaking but beautiful at the same time. Can't wait to see how Santana and Rachel deal with the upcoming events. Update soon! I'm loving this fic :)

bam_otaliafan18 November 24 2011, 13:34:02 UTC

Thank you for the comment! Hopefully the next chapter won't take as long to write as this one did :)

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bam_otaliafan18 November 24 2011, 13:34:57 UTC

Thank you for the comment! I'm glad that you approve of the slow build up (I'm trying not to rush things by putting them all together right away). Soon though :)