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ballroom_pink

Fic: Our Nation's Birthday

Jul 09, 2012 22:50

Title: Our Nation's Birthday ( Read more... )

Comments 16

jncar July 10 2012, 15:18:48 UTC

This is so fun! It reminds me a lot of a S2 episode, with the gang getting up to fun shenanigans.

Ron/meat is always the best ship. And the whole zoo animal thing is great. Plus Champion! We always need more Champion.

liebfraumi July 10 2012, 18:10:15 UTC

The script style is absolutely perfect. The characters´ voices get stronger in a way...

And you did the impossible: I felt sorry for Chris! If he says that something isn´t GREAT, this can only mean severe sadness.

Wonderful way to celebrate...because America. (*I giggled at that part)

ballroom_pink July 11 2012, 07:22:49 UTC

That's so nice of you to write.

greenshouse July 11 2012, 03:53:51 UTC

I can safely say that as a non-American, this fic made me feel strangely patriotic.

LOVED IT.

ballroom_pink July 11 2012, 07:21:46 UTC

Thanks.

saucydiva July 11 2012, 12:21:56 UTC

That's because AMERICA

saucydiva July 11 2012, 12:30:31 UTC

You're too delightful, really. I love that Andy leaves Champion in Ben's room, and that April Jerryied the fireworks, and that Millie is one of five runners because it's Pawnee so of course she is. This is just darling.