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Stakeout [Prince of Tennis; Eiji/Mizuki]

Jan 05, 2007 22:12

Title: Stakeout
Pairing: Eiji/Mizuki, Inui/Yanagi
Rating: PG
Summary: Eiji and Mizuki go spying on dates together. Sort of.
Word Count: ~2000
A/N: Well, it's my birthday and I'll write what I want to. Inspired by bloodybrilliant and chasingwhispers, with thanks to garlandgraves for shipping this pairing with me.

( Stakeout )

characters: mizuki, pairing: data pair, characters: renji, characters: eiji, characters: inui, pairing: eiji/mizuki, fandom: prince of tennis

Comments 31

dynastic January 7 2007, 00:11:07 UTC

AHHHH I LOVE THIS!! :]

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

*flails madly*

NEW OTP I SAY!!! :DDD

happiestwhen January 8 2007, 21:36:30 UTC

Thank you!!! XD

noticeably January 7 2007, 00:32:15 UTC

"Nyah, Fujiko, I would come over but I'm busy!!" - Mizuki pushes Eiji over and tries to grab the phone away - "I can't talk right now, I'm pinning Mizuki to the ground and- Ow! He just bit me again!"

I AM DEAD. Ahahaa, Mizuki biting Eiji is WIN. :D

I really like this! Not a pairing I'd usually think of, but you really make it work here - plus, you really got them. Mizuki seems like a character many have a problem writing, and Eiji is one that can become annoying or obnoxious if written wrong, but you got them both perfect. :D Also, the last couple of lines killed me.

Great job!

happiestwhen January 8 2007, 21:27:08 UTC

Thank you!! I'm so glad you thought I made the pairing work. It's based on a crack log from an rpg, so I was worried it would only make sense in my head... XD I was really worried I was going to make both Mizuki and Eiji too comical or over-the-top. So happy you enjoyed it, Evie!!

ex_pixystick865 January 7 2007, 02:02:22 UTC

fdjekdsl;kslakd I'm kind of in love with this. *_*

This has such perfect characterization and it's so adorable. ♥!

happiestwhen January 8 2007, 21:20:24 UTC

Thank you, Becca!! ♥

spurious January 7 2007, 02:29:25 UTC

Inui appearing on the earth like an alien = SO ACCURATE.

This is so awesomely funny. *_* Data pair date-o! And Mizuki trying to steal the phone from Eiji a;sdkljf I am imagining what he was planning to say to Fuji. XDD Date-o spying is the best. ♥_♥

happiestwhen January 8 2007, 21:10:02 UTC

omg, there should be fic where Mizuki plans out phone conversations and e-mails and letters and casual meet-ups with Fuji. He could practice them in front of the mirror and then Yuuta walks in and things get very awkward after that...

Why did I delete all my Mizuki icons except the one of his crotch?

spurious January 9 2007, 17:16:28 UTC

;alksjdf *____* that would be so wonderful. *_*

This is the only one I have at the moment. Your crotchone is totes better.

worblehat January 7 2007, 04:13:00 UTC

Linked here by Iso very enthusiastically. And oh man, I loved this fic - especially the voices you used. Eiji is so cute and aggressive and Mizuki...haha, Mizuki. With the binoculars. And the Data Pair. And biting. Fun stuff.

But Inui doesn't have any siblings and, come to think of it, he might not have any relatives either. Eiji really thinks that maybe Inui just sort of appeared on Earth fifteen years ago, like by magic, or aliens.

Hahaha, I laughed so hard at that. Poor alien!Inui. I wonder if he hangs out with E.T.

Thanks for sharing this!

happiestwhen January 8 2007, 21:02:35 UTC

Thank you!! I'm so glad you liked Eiji and Mizuki! I've never written them before so I'm glad they turned out sounding ok! :D :D