52 Days of Disaster - Day 18

[bakaknight]

Sorry it's up late - again, edited for appropriate times.
This one was cowritten as an RP with the ever-awesome glasspyramids , and yes, that is what I actually planned to be tonight's Disaster right from the get-go. But we did run a trifle overtime (coughfourhourscough) because we were having so much fun.
Slightly modified from the original, which is here.

Comments

[lady_wormtongue]

This is just beautiful. Their dialogue seemed quite natural to me, and I liked the "vigilante" wordplay quite a bit. :)

[bakaknight]

Thank you! I was actually rather pleased with that part myself. Death is a delight to write.

I'm afraid I can't take credit for any of Daniel's half of the dialogue; that's all down to glasspyramids.