Re: SPOT SPOT SPOTbakagreenireneJuly 26 2011, 00:30:00 UTC
hahaha this was kinda the first smut i've wrote so i couldn't really go hardcore on it >.< but anyways glad u liked it! (oh and sorry but minnie is with me ^^;;;)
Really, I almost die waiting for this chapter hohoh I was so excited^^'
Yunjae oh gosh you guys let the passion take the lead hohoho. While I was reading I was wondering "Yunho, how do you know how gay sex go? ah? position, lube, procedures? ah?" hohoohoohoh "You really wanted it". And yessss, you surely take notice of Jae that time when he tried to seduce you with the lotion hohohoh. Oh and Jae, yes. In fics don't specify the level of pain hohoho (I remember I once saw a pic with Jae reading a yaoi manga)
And yoosu^^' . Yoochun you will have to take step by step with Junsu (yunjae are too wild)but at least you know you have his heart.
ohhh this chapter with the beach remind me "Picture of you" mv , when the five are siting on the sand TT
hahahaha after reading the comments i had to go back through my story and realized my major plot hole (why DOES yunho magically know all the mechanics of gay sex)
whoops haha. Maybe I'll explain that later in the story (probably not cuz i'm lazy lolll)
anywayz, thx for reading as usual babe ^^ i'm glad ur paying attention to the finer details of my story lolzz!!
36,ooo words more???? omo i can't wait to read all of that kekekeke... >_< wow yunjae's first sex was hooot even it's kinda short kekekee... but still, i'm drooling here... and lol yunnie use jae's lotion kekekeke... ^^ and yooosu just holding hands?? i thought at least they gonna kiss... :( thanks for updating dear and keep posting soon... ^^
sorry girly! no i meant that i already had 36000 words so i'm almost done with the fic! haha but i actually can't wait to finish this fic so i can move on to others!
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LOLZ SOME PARTS WERE FUNNY NEH! XD
awww yoosu <3 soo cute
CAN'T WAIT FOR AN UPDATE! <3
changmin you can be w/ me XD
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Yunjae oh gosh you guys let the passion take the lead hohoho. While I was reading I was wondering "Yunho, how do you know how gay sex go? ah? position, lube, procedures? ah?" hohoohoohoh "You really wanted it". And yessss, you surely take notice of Jae that time when he tried to seduce you with the lotion hohohoh. Oh and Jae, yes. In fics don't specify the level of pain hohoho (I remember I once saw a pic with Jae reading a yaoi manga)
And yoosu^^' . Yoochun you will have to take step by step with Junsu (yunjae are too wild)but at least you know you have his heart.
ohhh this chapter with the beach remind me "Picture of you" mv , when the five are siting on the sand TT
Thanks for the update,waiting next^^
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whoops haha. Maybe I'll explain that later in the story (probably not cuz i'm lazy lolll)
anywayz, thx for reading as usual babe ^^ i'm glad ur paying attention to the finer details of my story lolzz!!
oh and picture of you! *sobs*
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