Comments | bakagreenirene: Battle of the Mins Chapter 2

bakagreenirene

Battle of the Mins Chapter 2

Jun 27, 2011 22:58

( Taemin continued conversationally, as if he was just talking about the weather, “Your secretary was quite pretty. Are you fucking her?” )

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Comments 23

minwhore June 28 2011, 03:48:52 UTC

spot keke~

bakagreenirene June 28 2011, 23:24:36 UTC

nicceee ^^

minwhore June 29 2011, 03:19:24 UTC

Aw, now I'm sure there's a reason behind why Taemin was apparently feeling such heartbreak during their relationship... I wonder what happened. -curious-

And I wonder what his motives are for coming back into Minho's life.

I love how bitchy you write him though LOL. It's amusing to see him like this every once in a while.

Great chapter!! Can't wait for the next~

<3

rainstormraider June 28 2011, 05:04:28 UTC

WOW.
Taemin is so many shades of awful and bratty in this.....LOVE IT.
I really like it when Minho isn't the default-ass-hole like he is in most fics....

bakagreenirene June 28 2011, 23:18:12 UTC

haha well i like to think he's not 100percent awful but you're gonna have to wait and see why! :)

mhn77 June 28 2011, 06:54:14 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad this chapter is so much longer!! I'm loving this story :) And now that it's getting much love you can make all the chapters long ;P
Your writing style is great and the flash backs work really well, I think.
And like rainstormraider said, it's nice with a non-ass-holey Minho for a change.

The image of a nervous Minho trying to re-arrange his neat desk made me lol for some reason :D

Oh, and I hope you get enough likes to update in only two days! That would eb freaking amazing! :D

bakagreenirene June 28 2011, 23:20:11 UTC

hahaha i'm glad u liked it dear! it's always encouraging when my readers leave me detailed comments :) yup, my next chapters will probly be longer too cuz i'm trying to keep this fic under ten chapters but we'll see! :)

mhn77 June 28 2011, 23:42:04 UTC

OMG Up to ten long chapters?! /HAPPY FLAILING

I'll be happy to comment on each and every one :)

I'll go wait now!

pinku_kireru June 28 2011, 07:42:37 UTC

Taemin cocked his head to the side and pretended to think for a moment, “Oh that. I don’t know…maybe I was just bored?”

“Slut.” => hahaha this was my favorite part. and i'm so in love with tae's slutty character :D

bakagreenirene June 28 2011, 23:21:03 UTC

hahahaha well there's more to taem then meets the eye! (though he is kinda a bitch hahaha) thx for reading!

minhosims June 28 2011, 07:46:21 UTC

done XD
hope you'll really get 10 people and do an update! XD

bakagreenirene June 28 2011, 23:21:49 UTC

didn't get quite 10 but pretty close! i'll probly update within the week anyway :)