I'll Be Seeing You

May 10, 2007 11:27

Chapter Fifty-Six: Puttin’ Out Fires ( Read more... )

i'll be seeing you, brokeback a/u, ennis/jack, brokeback

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thelastaerie May 10 2007, 20:57:59 UTC
Ha... maybe "jumping to conclusion" is Jack's 2nd favourite sport! But I can't blame him... most parents with a teenage son would think of that first. But I am real proud of Bobby.

Applaud to Ennis too, he dealt with the problem without resorting to violence... and I suppose Alma won't get too upset about the busted mailbox and fence now, eh?

I know the story is getting very close to the end... I miss them already.

Eve

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denim_girl2006 May 10 2007, 22:26:39 UTC
This was so funny, Jack & Ennis carrying on so............"It's a country road with no traffic. Trust you t' find the only obstacle for miles." The bible in the bedroom was funny too.......then it got rather serious. I was glad when Ennis didn't fly off the handle and he even let Jack comfort him and listened to Jack's advise. I loved this:
“Thanks,” Ennis murmured in Jack’s ear. “Whut’d I do?” “You’re you.” “Go to sleep now. You ain’t makin’ sense.” And even though it wasn't a funny situation when Ennis went to speak with Alma and Monroe, I couldn't help but chuckle at that scene with her standing there in her slip, etc. And it was even more funny when Ennis came out and he Jack & Bobby had their little conversation! Oh my, how funny. Love it. I did feel bad this all happened on Junior's wedding day though....kinda felt bad for Alma *gasp*
I was happy for Jenny though. And the end of the chapter *sigh*

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scarlettbaby May 10 2007, 22:52:32 UTC
Oh yeah
Jack and Ennis what is there they can't face together?

So good, so satisfying, so right.

I love how Ennis sees it finally
Jack is his strength, just like he is Jack's.

thank you for another wonderful chapter

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Bailey I'm in trouble...AND ITS ALL YOUR FAULT! george66 May 10 2007, 23:05:09 UTC
My ability to express to you how I feel about this story is beginning to dry up. I don't know how to tell with any real sense of how I'm feeling about this extraordinary story you have given us. I LOVE IT!! I LOVE IT!! I LOVE IT!! I LOVE IT ( ... )

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ifyoucantfixit1 May 11 2007, 01:26:47 UTC


As much as i love this story...I also love reading the comments of the others readers..Lori, Joe, and others, It shows how your story is effecting the whole fanbase of bbm. You are giving us the "sweet life",,to read and love together, and share with all of the other readers.
I love the blend you make of serious, funny, and growth..It is truly a great read.. janice

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