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not_hathor November 2 2007, 21:04:03 UTC
Whoa, Nellie!

Hurrah for Bess, and Cassie's swain Carl! Oh, I hope I hope I hope.....

Nicely done, and lovely Gallowstree in the header art.... gave me a chill!

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baileymoyes November 3 2007, 00:42:42 UTC
Thank you so much. If I remember correctly, I got the Gallowstree art from a retro site about "Scarecrow of Romney Marsh". And thank you for reminding me of the lovely word "swain". Don't be surprised if it turns up in a future chapter.

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trekfan November 2 2007, 21:31:39 UTC
I love this STORY. Jack loves Ennis and as soon as he hear he was in trouble he forgot everything and is rushing to see him. But he isn't thinking clearly, I hope Carl is able to head him off and tell him what is waiting for him at the inn.

More please Connie.

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baileymoyes November 3 2007, 00:47:03 UTC
So true, Linda. Jack's only weakness is Ennis. But Ennis is not quite the helpless mooncalf some take him for. So glad you're enjoying this one.

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trekfan November 3 2007, 03:26:44 UTC
So Ennis is like some hidden monster underneath just waiting to strike out? (like a hulk ;)

oh I love this story!

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jacks_key November 2 2007, 21:44:29 UTC
You go, Bess! I love her. This is such a great story. Can't wait for more! :)

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baileymoyes November 3 2007, 00:54:54 UTC
I'm so stoked that you like Bess. I'm not exactly a dab hand at believable female characters and it means a lot to me that you like her.

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camillar November 2 2007, 22:06:03 UTC
Very nervous here...but loving this!
Camilla

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baileymoyes November 3 2007, 00:57:25 UTC
Camilla is one of my favorite names in the whole world thanks to Sheridan Le Fanu's novel.

Things are tense just now, but I intend to write two endings for this story. One will be happy and the other... not so happy. So you can choose for yourself. Thank you so much for reading.

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coffeecat33 November 2 2007, 22:06:52 UTC
What dire peril! Will the lad find our Hero in time to warn him? I pray so. Ods Bodkins - I fear the tension is too much and I faint. *swoons*

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baileymoyes November 3 2007, 00:58:06 UTC
*adores your in character comments*

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