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I am a Rock cwby30 September 5 2007, 03:52:05 UTC
Evenin'.

Well, that was so fine. At the end of the previous chapter, had some hard thoughts about Jack riding off on that cycle alone. Glad to read that nothing happened, and that Hitcher was a hit. KE rings true, not happy with the situation, but since he can't fix it he has to stand it...course being rich makes standing it a lot easier.

And Randy!Jack and NotSoShyAnyMore!Ennis, in the alley, feeling each other up...Whoa! Guess Jack will have to accompany Ennis on his book tour, nothing else would do.

Great story, enjoyed it all the way through.

As for what's coming next, I could say I'll be looking for ewe in the pasture, or something like that, but I won't.

Thanks again.

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Re: I am a Rock baileymoyes September 5 2007, 04:13:23 UTC
And a very good evening to you, friend. I'm sorry I've been unable to reply to all of your comments, but I want you to know that I've enjoyed each and every one. I have to start another series just so I can look forward to your patented "Evenin'". I'm sending you a dozy embrace until we meet again.

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Re: I am a Rock cwby30 September 5 2007, 06:00:49 UTC
Evenin', again.

Well, appreciate the embrace, makes me feel warm all over, and happy trails to you, too. :)

Thanks again.

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fizzerbass September 5 2007, 04:11:45 UTC
I, for one, am very glad that you can't say good-bye to this crew; they're fantabulous!

Looking forward to the interlewd (and wondering why no one has ever come up with that saying before!)

Fizzer

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baileymoyes September 5 2007, 04:16:49 UTC
For shizzle, my Fizzle. I can't say so long without one more visit and the boys deserve a proper send off. As for interlewd... I'm sure someone has been that lame before. ;D I'm a hopeless pun-maker. There. You know my shameful secret. *big kiss*

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Wonderful torry28 September 5 2007, 04:17:54 UTC
I hardly know what to say, it is so wonderful,all of it the dialog between everyone and the way Ennis dealt with the paparazzi,and then the touching part with the car and the acceptance of the love between Ennis and Jack by Kerry, brought tears to my eyes. I hate to see another great story end, but
you always have more stories to keep me glued to your Journal.
Thank you for another great story and a Happy ending.
Torry

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Re: Wonderful baileymoyes September 5 2007, 04:24:58 UTC
Thank you, Torry. I wish I'd had more time to spend with Kerry and I'm glad you found his position realistic. I'm very complimented that the story touched you. I hope you like the closing chapter too.

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onlyonesock September 5 2007, 05:09:45 UTC
This story just had everything. It was funny as hell, it was sad as well it had great other characters, perfect dialogue. I loved the fact that Ennis came from a wealthy family because I don't think we've ever seen that before have we? Jack's porno stories were priceless. The whole thing had a comic opera quality to it.

This sentence was lovely: “Don’t hurt ‘im, Gene,” said the dark-eyed intruder, slouching against a bookshelf in a manner that finally gave Leon a chance to use the word insouciant." Hilarious! I used to work for a lawyer whose goal in life it was to drop the words diaphanous and ephemeral into conversations. (We never knew why.)

I'm so sorry it's over although apparently it isn't. Looking forward to the last little spasm.

xxsock

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baileymoyes September 6 2007, 16:32:09 UTC
Thank you, Sock. I look forward to your comments.

btw: It must be a lawyer thing. I know one that's addicted to the words equanimity and semantics. Guess they want to impress us with all that there book-learnin'.

Hope you enjoy the last chapter. I just can't let them go without a "happy ending".

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eandj September 5 2007, 05:44:59 UTC
I can’t seem to say good-bye to these guys just yet.
And that´s totally how I feel myself.
A peek into their bedroom every once in while would also be OK with me-ha.
I found this story very late but loved
it nonetheless.
Thank you for sharing.
Paula

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